Reviewed by Key Keeper Nina recklessnina

Author: Cherry-bl-ossom
Title: One kiss one blush one ass
Genre : Humour

Cover : 3/5 

I see the effort, but it’s irritating to the eyes because it looks ( sorry for the word ) cheap. The quality isn’t that good and that’s ok, there is always lots of room for improvement.

Blurb : 4/5 

It’s catchy and quite intriguing.

Title : 4/5 

It’s very creative just that it’s not that appropriate..? I don’t know, it’s a little weird for me. But, that’s just in my opinion. 

Plot : 7/10

The plot is, weird? I don’t know, I know it’s suppose to be fiction, but be a little more realistic and I get how you try to introduce us to these set of characters who each play a significant part, but they seem to act childish and not at all their age. It’s all very middle school ish. I highly recommend you work on that because others might find it weird.

Character Development : 14/15

It’s a little bit rushed, but I can differentiate the characters well, which I like. Some books, I forget who’s who. 

Spelling and Grammar : 5/10

YOU NEED TO WORK ON THIS. Ok, I don’t wanna come out as harsh, but there are JUST some of the things in the first chapter which I already found irritating. Especially the part when you wrote, “planet’s away”, it should be “planets away”. If those are just typos, make sure to edit and skim over a chapter multiple times before publishing. Also, the spacing, BE MINDFUL OF THE SPACING. It’s so much harder to read with very awkward spacing. It’s not appealing to the eyes as well. Work on that.    

Overall : 7/10 

Just work mainly on the spelling, grammar and spacing because this is one of the biggest let down on this book. Other than that, the plot is okay-ish. 

Good luck!!