Reviewed by Ky

Author: xxdomeafavourxx
Title: Beckoning Silence
Genre: Teen Fiction

Cover: 4/5

I love the cover! I don't know what you had in mind but its a perfect for the story! For me the girl running is Lisa and the other one her mother. It's open to imagination

Title: 5/5

A title like cover has to caught one's eye and yours want me to pick it up and know what silence is she taking about!

Blurb: 5/5
Again the blurb does its job. It's short yet luring!

Plot: 8/10

I had trouble following the story in the beggining, I didn't really know what was happening but that's the point I guess! Plus does Lisa really have to move right now? Here I mean her guardian's part. First show the other's. How she having fun and all and then her uncle breaks the news.

Character development: 14/15

It's amazing! Slow, and steady. I can feel them before me. Feel because you are showing them to me. Lisa is by far my favourite! I love the birdy chirp part XD.
But somewhere along her Uncle, her character seemed too rushed. You should read it all again!

Spelling and Grammar: 8/10

There are some minor grammatical mistakes which hinder the flow of the sentences but those can easily be removed with a second reading. The mistakes are less as the story advances!

Overall: 8/10

Other Comments:

Overall I loved the story and want to read more! It's a different idea and I can see it being successfull in the future! Combined with your personality it a fighting duo!

Love ky