Reviewed by Kenerelda

Author: tonyvont : Selkis
Title:  The army of time

Title: 3/5

Creative and well thought out. 

Cover: 4/5

The names can be seen clearly and it matches with the title and the theme in the story. 

Blurb: 3/5

Doesn't sound interesting but the idea is great. It has great potential but is messed up with lazy writing. 

Plot: 8/10

The plot as the summary says is a really good idea but the result of that idea is not very interesting since your writing style seems a bit rushed, not good enough descriptions about the surrounding area, or the character himself. A few minor error which are not as noticeable. There were no major plotholes, well thought out but the language is rushed and not used well enough.  

Character development: 9/15

All the characters mentioned have similar character or personality, indifferent from others. The character development needs working on in a positive way.

Spelling and grammar: 8/10

Minor bugs and errors that can be fixed while re-editing if you ever pick it back up. 

Overall: 7/10

The idea is great but the writing is really loose. It's a book with a great concept messed up with lax writing style. It can get a reader hooked on it till the end but the writing style makes it less interesting since it feels rushed. Intense and strong language can help. 

Other comments: The idea is cool. Liked it. 

That's all.

Have an amazing day! 

Kira