Author: Candence_Dork
Title: Working out the kinks
Genre: Teen Fiction

Cover: 2/5
Your cover is hard to read because of the color of text. I suggest getting a more detailed cover as well.

Blurb: 1/5
I don't really think your blurb gives enough information, also the way you describe each character should have a separate paragraph and have a bit more foreshadowing details.

Title: 1/5
I understand the reason for the title, but I think you could come up with something better, something more creative.

Plot: 3/10
I think you have a very generic story. Boyfriend cheats, girlfriend gets pissed about it, and thus the revenge and drama. The thing that I don't like about your book is that it's not unique, I've read hundreds of these kinds of stories and yours is similar.

Character Development: 5/15
If you put more detail into your characters and developed their personalities better, you would have more readers relate and read your story.

Spelling and Grammar: 2/10
A rule you should know is that when a character speaks they get their own paragraph. You switch tenses a lot and have many grammatical errors, you should proofread your chapters or have friends or family read it over.

Overall: 3/10
I didn't really like the book because it's not something I would read. It is cliche, but the way you go about it being that way is not what I expected.

Kat❤❤