Reviewed by Key Keeper Kat CaliKat000

Author: anonboo
Title: Epiphany
Genre: Werewolf

Cover: 1/5

Your cover is great but the grey blur over it all makes the blend of the two stand out a lot. And the blood drip in the corner makes the cover look really photoshopped. I think if you request a manip cover from a shop it will help you out with the readers who judge books by their cover.

Blurb: 3.5/5

I think the little Preview clip you have in your blurb should be the blurb itself. It has a very good attention grabber and the details really help to display your writing style. I think you should add more detail about the pack and the rogues after the preview.

Title: 3/5

I read the book but I still didn’t quite understand what the title reflects from the story. If you could explain that would be very helpful. It looks great on the book cover though!

Plot: 9/10

I like that your story isn't a basic, werewolf romance! You push the plot in every chapter from each scene to each detail! I only suggest a little more action between the other members of the pack.

Character Development: 13/15

I like that you detail the emotion the MC and others are feeling. You draw in every emotion and then its like you double the amount of pain you want the readers to feel. I wanted to know more about the transition between human and werewolf through your description throughout the story, like how the senses are heightened and the instinct to react before thinking.

Spelling and Grammar: 7/10

You give great imagery to the readers, but I think you could work on using more transitional words, it will help your descriptions and details flow better. It will help you capture a scene! Also, you need to make sure the readers know who is talking even if it's a quick “I said” or “blank said” type of deal. It's important that the readers can follow the dialogue, especially because it's the whole push of the plot. I noticed there are patches of italics paragraphs that shouldn't be. A quick glance over the chapters should fix the problem.

Overall: 7/10

Although your story has its bumps, it's a great plot.

Other Comments:

Some tips I have are:

-Work on transitions.

-Expand vocabulary.

-Make a pronunciation chart for the names.

-Look for a new cover.

-Fix minor grammar errors.

-Work on your blurb.

-Keep up the great detail/imagery/description!

Kat <3 <3