Reviewed by -jolyne

Author: Witto150
Title: Silver Darkness
Genre: Fanfic (Sonic The Hedgehog),

Cover : 3 / 5

I like this concept , too , but there is huge color - clashing and it's a bit blurred, too

Blurb : 1 / 5 

A bit long , and there's already misspellings and grammar issues :/ Not a great start.

Title : 5 / 5 

Silver darkness sounds pretty cool , not even gonna lie about it.

Plot : 7 / 10 

Almost immediate conflict and honestly , I'm not a huge fan of that . It seemed to be really rushed and I'd really recommend using a different plot device to get things going.

Character development : 13 / 15 

I don't really see a whole lot of it. Although it is a fanfiction , you should still try and develop them a bit more , especially since it isn't a short one - shot / one - act story.

Spelling / grammar : 6 / 10 

A whole lot of grammar issues were found and there were a variety of them. Also , split the dialogue tags from the dialogue itself so that the paragraphs aren't dauntingly long

Overall : 6 / 10 

Honestly , can't say much about the actual characters and how true they are to canon since I've never been a big fan of sonic , but I can definitely see how some effort was put in to this story :)