Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: DarkRoyallty
Genre : Romance
Book title: my so called friend's husband

Cover : 3/5

- just seems a little uncreative. try something not as obvious as to what the story is about and leave some more mystery

- font also doesn't seem to fit very well and is just placed on

Blurb : 2/5 

- I personally don't think you should include such an explicit scene in your blurb right away. There's a lot of younger readers on this site / people who aren't into that sort of thing so it would turn them away pretty much immediately 

- capitalization, grammatical errors are a bit obvious which is also another thing that can deter potential readers from reading. 

Title : 4/5

- it's a nice title, especially for what the book is about, but it just seems to reveal too much about what it's about. try to keep it mysterious but also just enough to keep readers wondering

Plot : 5/10

- the plot's too convenient for my taste and kind of one - dimensional. 

- feels rushed at certain places

Character development : 7/15

- lumerica / Kevin's relationship could've been described a lot more. maybe spend at least a chapter or two focus on their falling in love 

- also focus on the friend's relationship with Nicky 

- and the two girl's friendship as well. overall there wasn't much development and I feel that you kind of jumped into the affairs and lustful tendencies way too quick 

Spelling and grammar  : 6/10 

- quite a few misspellings and capitalization errors

- punctuation errors also littered throughout

- blocking for quotations and dialogue also not too strong

Overall : 4/10