Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: HillbillieNolan
Genre: poetry
Title: infinite thoughts

Cover 1/5

- definitely forgettable / too general

- consider being more creative with the cover instead of just a picture 

Blurb 2/5

- also pretty generic

- perhaps putting in a quote or something hook - y to catch a potential reader's attention

Title 2/5

- once again, also generic. there's a lot of poetry on wattpad and you'll need to stand out. infinite thoughts seems too dull so try something a bit more creative and interesting

Plot 6/10

- not really any plot that i saw, but poetry can be that sometimes

- i recommend telling a story still. poetry is an art form and though poetry is sometimes just a bunch of fanciful words written together, it should also tell stories or have a point 

Character development 9/15

- there's characters in a few of your poetry which is good

- not a lot of personality to them though

- maybe having less generic scenarios would be helpful

Spelling and grammar 7/10

- overall, there's a lot of good spelling and grammar, but i'd say be careful for those easy to miss mistakes. it shouldn't be that hard, too, so definitely go through some of them before you publishing :D

Overall 6/10

- your poetry seems pretty ok, but it could definitely be improved. also, one thing i haven't mentioned yet is the format. it seems a little crowded and there should be multiple stanzas at some points. 

- the footers should also be clearly separated since it feels weird to read a poem and then immediately be asked to vote / comment