Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: Justice K. (@1134Words)
Title: Home
Genre: Fantasy

Review

Cover : 5 / 5

Super minimalistic , sleek and just nice to look at!

Blurb : 5 / 5

Really made me excited to read the story , so the blurb is done really well ! :)

Title : 4 / 5

In my opinion , it's a bit too generic . Maybe try and get a bit more creative with it ?

Plot : 9 / 10

Really good pace , the beginning ( first chapter ) just seemed a tad bit weak...

Character development : 15 / 15

Even though it's just the first three chapters , right off the bat , I could see the personalities of the characters and the overall system of how the group worked .

Spelling and grammar : 6 / 10

Blocking and dialogue marks were just a bit messy and generic.

Overall : 9 / 10

An amazing concept with a very interesting background story <3 i'd love to see this developed further into a longer piece ! :)