Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: Ciel__Phamtomhive
Title: Designed Humans
Genre: science fiction

Cover 5/5

- Really nicely designed. I especially love the title's slight tints in contrast with the otherwise monochromatic color scheme

Blurb 4/5

- The first two paragraphs really pique my interest and right away, I know a bit about the world I'm about to enter.
- It's a bit much, though, especially with the long paragraph of questions

Title 5/5

- Short and to the point. No complaints here.

Plot 8/10

- It's a bit slow, and a bit confusing at times but it falls together pretty well later along the line

Character development 15/15

- I love it how right away, we can really tell what kind of character the main character is just by a few thoughts of his. Given that something extreme did happen to mankind, of course, but you used it really well.

Spelling and grammar 10/10

- Just a few slight mistakes, but it's good!

Overall 9/10

- I personally didn't like the pacing and the length of the chapters as much, but overall, it's pretty good!