Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: MaryEllenCampbell
Title: A Night Within A Day
Genre: Random as of this moment

Cover : 3 / 5 

It's cluttered , but I like the idea! 

Blurb : 3 / 5 

Definitely a run - on and you can make it flow better , but I can understand it and it gets the point across.

Title : 5 / 5

It's an interesting title and seems paradoxical! Would surely draw in readers.

Plot : 9 / 10 

I like the set - up and everything , but it just seems to be moving a bit too slow for me at first and not much is happening. 

Character development : 13 / 15

I know it's just the beginning and not much has happened quite yet , but even so , I feel like we could know more about "Anna Thomas" a lot more in the beginning and right off the bat. 

Spelling and grammar : 7 / 10 

Just a lot of simple mistakes that I caught i.e. who's v. whose and a bunch of run - ons. Just be careful :) 

Overall : 9 / 10 

Amazing idea , just could be polished up. I love the idea of a different world and dreams! ( btw I would put this in the genre of fantasy :) )