Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: abellanacara101
Genre: Teen Fiction
Book title: A Dream to Reality

Cover : 5/5

- really liked the colors and your choice of font ! 

Blurb : 3/5 

- a few odd sentences in there that didn't make complete sense the first time I read through it but I got it eventually haha

- seems a bit cluttered, maybe break it down for easier consumption 

Title : 5/5

- really interesting title ! keeps just enough to let the reader know what it's about, but not too much to keep mystery 

Plot : 6/10

- honestly, I was kind of confused a lot of the time. I get that it's supposed to be confusing, but I think after three chapters, the reader should at least know what's happening and it just seems that not a lot was happening in terms of plot 

Character development : 7/15

- Louie seems very one - dimensional. There's not a lot we know about him even after three chapters and all I know is that he swears a lot. Which seems a bit boring to me

- speaking of swearing ( sidenote ) by repeating swears and stuff, you kind of distract from the overall plot and slow it down where you could be adding other things that help either character or plot development 

Spelling and grammar  : 7/10 

- there's not a lot of spelling errors, but grammar is off here and there

- dialogue is also poorly formatted at times 

Overall : 6/10

- other than what I've previously said, I suggest you break up large paragraphs