Reviewed by Key Keeper Cade Cadence_Dork Brema_stone_is_alive

Title: Missing Piece of History
Author: Niranju98

Cover 3/5

The butterfly looks cool I just don't like it all that much. Sorry to be blunt :(

Blurb 4/5

It looks ok for the most part it just didn't really grab my attention.

Title 3/5

You could have come up with something more original or creative in my opinion.

Plot 6/10

Your plot is hard to follow and got carried on for a really long time. I think you should write more in one chapter instead of many short chapters.

Character development 13/15

I really did not care for your characters in all honesty because they were a little basic.

Spelling and grammar 8/10

You had a couple of misplaced commas and misspelled words in your chapters.

Overall 7/10

Your book just did not grab my attention and felt a little forced like you gave up halfway through and had to force yourself to write the rest.

I am really sorry if I sound mean I am just telling what I think. Your boom might be nice to others but I really did not care for it. 💜