Reviewed by Key Keeper Cade Brema_stone_is_alive

Title:  Designed Humans
Author:  Kenerelda

Cover 5/5

Your cover fits the book perfectly and  it is easy to read the title of your book on it! 

Blurb 4/5 

Your blurb is good other than a few wording issues I found but those can be fixed easy.

Title 5/5 

I really love your title because of how great it goes with the book!

Plot 9/10

Your plot makes sense for the most part but I find the whole destruction of the world before the three main characters were born or when they were young to be a bit confusing to follow because it is only mention a little bit and when they are hallucinating so it was hard to tell what was part of it and what was not.

Character development 14/15 

You are able to get on a personal level with your main characters which is great but your doctor has a very weird vibe to him because he is supposed to be evil but they say he talk with a chill or relaxed voice that made them a bit calmer so that made me cunfuzzled.

Spelling and grammar 7/10

Your wording is not always perfect and that is fine but you have it happen often so you might need to proof read a little more so you can catch those flaws. I did see your book wss bein edited so that is just one of the things you should look for. Otherwise you were fine(¡ ^-^)¡

Overall 9/10

Your book was really good do I kept reading until chapter thirteen then I started to write this and I can tell you that your book is amazing and with a little work and time it will be even better I will say you should update on a regular basis because I have found that attacks readers and makes life a little more organized! Your book had action that kept me entertained and it wss really hard to put down my phone because I enjoyed it so much! Again I think you should go back to explain what happened with all the fire and destruction that Alter mentioned during his exam because it would help with the overall turn out of your book! 🙂