Cade: Crimson Knight

Reviewed by Keeper Cade Brema_stone_is_alive

Author: OncerQueen16 / Kay
Book: Crimson Knight 

Cover 4/5

I like your cover you have right now. ^-^

Blurb 4/5

Your blurb tells about what the boom is gonna be about so perfectly and I love it. However you could have wrote about some of the stuff in a chapter but it is your book 😗

Title 5/5

I thought your title fit the book well because of your M/C's connection with the color red or crimson.

Plot 10/10

So far so good to me.

Character development 13/15

We know your characters so far, but do we know your characters.

Spelling 9/10

Because you are a younger writer I think you did a good job for most part just make sure you add commas every so often.

Overall 8/10

I really liked your book and I wish you would update more so I had more to read for the review. Because it is in its early stages I think I am gonna continue to read and help you out because I like it. 💜

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