Reviewed by Key-Keeper Ava Avocados12

Author: jackrichardjones
Title: Brave-The Unrecognized
Genre: Non-Fiction

Review

Cover
1/5

The words are very difficult to read and there is too much big text on it.

Blurb:
4/5

A little confusing with the 'one day later' thing,

Title:
4/5

Not very descriptive but leaves the book mysterious.

Plot:
6/10

There has only been two chapters so there is not much to judge but it is quite difficult to follow at times.
The character's emotions need to be described and it needs to be more straightforward.

Character Development:
7/15

All I know is that James has anger issues, other than that not much and I only know that because you
have told me not shown me. There are only two chapters so it is hard to judge.

Spelling and Grammar:
5/10

Some of the sentences are very twisted and what is with the spaces around exclamation marks? You
only need one after it when you begin a new sentence.

Overall:
5/10

Other Comments:

It is a good idea but needs to be developed further. Your strength is including dialogue but your
weaknesses include, show don't tell, plot development and sentence structure. I was not able to read
much as there was only two chapters which influenced your marks.
There is your review, I hope it aids you in becoming a better writer.

♡Key-Keeper Ava