Hey gummy bears,
Hope y'all are doing well?
This review is going to be on "Eddsworld: Story that you honestly shouldn't read" by limu_emu
So here we go!

Plot development:
Plot is pretty good... honestly if I should say that I didn't laugh while reading, I would be lying.
The plot treats a very serious subject and kind of blends it with humour.
It's definitely not like anything I've ever read on Wattpad. It's really good and entertaining though it just has six parts. You really have a plot I can sink my teeth into, and I would be lying if I say I didn't pay rapt attention to it.
And trust me, that's not what I say for all books I read.

I find the little commercials you did in-between scenes really cute💯
To be honest that was actually the fun part of it all...you were able to communicate your idea in a simple manner, your choice of words weren't confusing. I also commend your use of flashbacks
This is my first time reading a book with this writing style on Wattpad, and I'm honestly grateful your book got to be the first.

I find it cool that you made a recap of every previous chapter at the start of a new one...it really made be remember and be in the moment.
I totally felt in another world and went smoothly with the plot. It wasn't distorted or confusing. It was just... wonderful. I feel like this book should instead be named "Eddsworld: Story you honestly should read", cause it's definitely worth the time.

I really don't like the way you left your readers in suspense with a cliffhanger (I'm a reader toooo*frowns*)...please when you're free update soon😂.
It's a 8/10

Character development:
While reading, I felt like I was watching a killer movie series on Netflix with popcorn. I honestly love the characters although they have really diverse personalities.
Like you made it clear to your readers from the onset that each character has strengths and weaknesses... everyone really has their flaws.

I find it funny that you don't want to give us a TordxTom relationship...you honestly extinguish the spark at every opportunity you get, which is quite agonizing...but...that's what I like...you really leave your readers wanting more. Don't you?

I find it stupid that Edd actually jumped in the way. I honestly don't get part six, but I really hope you give us closure soon.
I really want to know what Tord got himself into and why people call him "boss"
You accurately used your character to explain the negative effect of anger and drugs, which is a killer moral lesson.
I love other characters and their roles too, and I hope you give us more drama, action and maybe finally the TordxTom relationship we've been waiting for*winks*
It's a 8/10

Book cover:
Your book cover is pretty cool. I assume that's Tord on the cover cause of some details you gave in the book.
It's really cool and funny that you didn't use the name of the book instead.

But, if it's possible that you can use the name of the book on the cover it itself, please do... it'll still be really cool.
Nevertheless, it's still good. It's a 7/10

Grammatical erorrs:
Well, you're really cool with your grammar. Your choice of words are simple and really easy to understand, so that just improved my reading experience.
Though I did spot a few errors.
The corrections to errors are in bold and additional explanation given in brackets.
Please draw my attention to anywhere you're not clear and I would gladly attend to you.

Part 1 :Hallucinations:

Paul: Tord... Pat and I are worried about you and, well, we think you should get help. ("Pat and I" not "me and Pat" and also I feel there's no need for "both" before "worried")

Part 3: Saving Tord:

He got home with tears in his eyes, and his friends, Edd and Matt wanted to help him. (There's meant to be a comma after "friends")

Patryck: Apparently he had a major panic attack and because of all the stress, lots of oil and gases from the robotic arm came out from his mouth and arm, which caused him to hallucinate and faint. (Please take note of the position of the commas..."arm" and "out from")

Part 4: We meet again:

High school Tord: I thought I told you to never speak to me again. (Note "to")

Part 5: Tord's true feelings:

Last part, Tom found out what was happening with Tord's health, and was able to locate him with the help of Paul.
(Not "waas")

Part 6: The truth:

Paul: Now your eye color changes according to your emotions! (The one is bold fits better)

General Review:
Like I said, I feel this book should be named "Eddsworld: Story you honestly should read" because it's really good.

I recommend this book to fiction, action, thriller and yeah... suspense category/genre lovers.
Overall rating: 8/10

Next up: "Blood secret" by Historyfan2003

Have a lovely week!

XOXO,
Candy lover
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