I'm so proud of all the participants. Please don't feel bad after reading the reviews. I promise these are to help you in improving. Also, don't feel bad if you didn't win. You all are talented, no matter if you win or not. Taking part in awards itself is a win for you all.

One more thing, I'm going to come up with the mini awards after I'm done with this. If any of you unfollow me or the judge, you will be blacklisted forever.

The winners will get their prizes once all the results are announced. I'll text you all personally with the prizes.

Now let us check the reviews and then the winners.

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Judge- Cool_Summer29 

The Mysterious Plushie - Noshin7bear 

Book Cover: (3/5)

The cover is a simple image with a font, which appears plain. I would suggest editing it a bit or taking the help of a cover shop.

Book Title: (4.5/5)

The plot surely goes in with the title and that makes it very accurate but not very 'interesting'.

Blurb: (2.5/5)

The blurb looks informative but plain. Firstly, there's a typo in the blurb: "Imagine *you watching..." Though it made me quite curious to read the book but repetition of the same words makes it brooding, I would suggest using some decorative language.

Plot: (13/15)

The story starts off with a conversation between Bella and Fl in the cafe. I can't really term this as an interesting start to the first chapter but I won't cut marks because I see it's a soft, fluff plot.

Ok! I loved this cute yet unique idea of talking to this mysterious plushie to make your crush talk to you. Woah! I thought Bella is being childish at first but looks like I was wrong, plushie did have some magical powers. I was lowkey scared thinking 'Is that plushie cursed or something?!' I read this story at 1 AM midnight and trust me I was a little scared and all sorts of ghostly theories clouded my mind.

Writing Style: (13/15)

The writing is smooth, simple, and all in all lovely. I can understand the plot. It was a cute story and I liked reading it.

Memorable lines and moments–

"Love made me this weak."

All of the café members falling on top of each other, that moment is pure comedy.

Eunmi asking Bella to say what she wants and all the boys screaming their never-ending requests. (That was hilarious!)

"My life is a lie." (LMAO when someone reads the story for sure this line will be memorable.)

"The girls who have chubby cheeks and are a bit fat, having pimples are my type because these types of girls remind me of plushies and plushies remind me of you." (That was so sweet, I melted at this line.)

Grammar, vocabulary and punctuation: (13/15)

I didn't get a hold of many grammatical errors and the vocabulary was simple but punctuation errors were prevalent throughout the story.

Some mistakes I want to point out-

"Welcome to our cafe *," [Sentences should end with a full stop (or other exclamation marks) not a comma, it's wrong punctuation. I observed this is everywhere in the story which will apply that the dialogues are in continuation. It'll be weird right?]

"Oh no~ I messed up again~ why is this cloth so stubborn~it isn't staying still on it's place~" [Again, punctuation errors] {Chapter 3}

"It's me who

asked him not to spill anything to you," [There's no need to change the line and leave a space in between.] {Chapter 13}

Character Development: (13.5/15)

You got me at the chapter when Jimin entered but didn't pay attention to our dear FL, I was genuinely curious thinking whether they had some bad history or he likes her or something. I'm in awe of their friendship. Bella instantly knew there's something wrong with Eunmi when she didn't eat the food, even Jungkook called her just to make her not feel lonely. She's quite a fun-loving and quirky character with an emotional side. Also, the aesthetics you put in the header and footer are so cute! As much as I loved the leads, I cringed out with Aera's parts (well, her character was written to be an attention seeker, so yeah.) The tip of Jungkook's pencil broke and I laughed so much, he's cute even when he's angry. (lol)

Well, I didn't see a triangle coming between Eunmi, Jimin and Soobin. But yeah, I honestly liked Soobin's character. Even though he has meager parts, still it had a good impact on the story. I liked him more than Jimin honestly because I just couldn't understand why he was avoiding the girl so much and being literally an angel towards others? Nevertheless, he helped Eunmi the very next day and so, Author, I'm taking that bear with me. (I'll use it to propose my bias or ask it to make me a billionaire XD) The scene where Jimin helps her in the rain is just so soft and cute. I was smiling nonstop while reading that. Also, reading the whole story, I guess it wasn't the plushie that was cursed, it was Jimin who was mysterious. You got me for real at that part.

Emotions conveyed: (12.5/15)

The writing was a bit simple and the emotions were conveyed smoothly but I guess it requires a little brush up of decorative vocabulary and descriptions, it'll make it appealing.

Overall connection as a reader: (8/10)

I found the story really creative and cute which ultimately makes it a good read. You nice, keep going! :)

[P.S.: I felt like I was scammed at the very last part! I ain't complaining though. :") But I want to ask, was it initially there and then you thought to play pranks?]

Total: (83/100)

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TEMPTATION - Seong_Grace 

Book cover: (4.5/5)

The cover is top-notch! No cap.

Book title: (4/5)

The story blends in with the title, it's a good title.

Blurb: (5/5)

Woah! The blurb is so beautifully written, I'm impressed. The words, the emotions, the sweet little poem you added and also the quote at last. It made me curious to read the book.

Plot: (11/15)

The story starts off with Y/N being so excited yet nervous for her entrance exam that she was almost on the verge of getting into a car accident had it not been for our Jimin to stop the car and help her out. Well, from the first chapter I could make out they both have quite a rough relationship. Initially, I assumed it to be a cute melodramatic story but no you got me in the second half of the second chapter when Jungkook asked Jimin about the Italian weapon dealings. I see this turned out to be a romance thriller but there were no jaw-dropping moments to term it as a 'thriller'.

Writing style: (14/15)

The writing style was good and I found a rich vocabulary used. The part when Park Empire gets attacked, that whole chapter is written so beautifully, the vocab was chef's kiss!

Some memorable lines–

"Temptation, an indescribable force in matters of human love, possessed an immense power that even God couldn't explain."

"It is true that love can hurt but it is worth enduring the pain."

"The allure of something we yearn for will inevitably tempt us back one day."

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation: (12/15)

I didn't find many grammatical errors but typos and punctuation errors could be found. The vocabulary was rich. There were some statements that I didn't understand at all.

This one quote in Chapter 5: When will our love answer's it's start.

This quote too in Chapter 7: Never wish to hurt you in the middle.

I didn't understand this statement at all.

Some mistakes I want to point out-

"Writing a paragraph, she *sighed the glass and gulped down the water." [I didn't understand this sentence at all.] {Prologue}

I can see some grammatical errors as the tense of the sentences changes from past to present, at times from present to past. I would suggest using a single tense while writing. Another thing is the dialogues are in mid of a paragraph which made me confused at times, like who's saying what? Also, please don't use a comma to end a dialogue, it feels as if it's continuing. A full is what is required there.

" *Butt who cares..." [Prologue]

"It is only her *beasties from *kindergarden that are still together." [Prologue]

"...and her brother *Jungook." [I have no problem when one misspells names but for bias everything can be kept aside. It's 'Jungkook' :) ] {Chapter 1}

"Yahh, you, " [Punctuation errors] {Chapter 2}

Character development: (12/15)

There were romantic moments but I felt they were a bit bland, as if lacking character development. I liked the story and your writing style is truly beautiful, those intricate descriptions you give make the story appear realistic but I felt somewhere or the other it was rushed, especially the part where Y/N confessed to Jimin, like a lack of character development. Jimin likes Y/N but like every other fanfiction guy, man won't leave a chance to annoy her (well, that's cute). Also, that slap in the club definitely turned out to be a disaster in their relationship. I guess he was taken away by emotions.

Emotions conveyed: (11/15)

Though the writing style was good, things felt quite rushed and so, the emotions felt a bit lacking.

Overall connection as a reader: (7.5/10)

The story was a decent read with a subtle flow of beautiful descriptions.

Total: (81/100)

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The Whimsical Coquette - strawberry1d 

Book cover: (4/5)

The cover appears pretty and has a good font, but I guess it lacks a theme that can be connected to the story.

Book title: (5/5)

I absolutely fell for the title, it's so aesthetic and relates well to the plot! Good work there.

Blurb: (4/5)

The blurb was nicely written and informative, it made me curious to read the book and see how the story unfolds.

Plot: (5/15)

The story reminds me of this Kdrama "A Business Proposal" (I think it's a bit inspired from there, considering the images used and some parts of the plot seem similar). The plot, all in all, lacks creativity. I see a lot of similarities from the drama and I can't term this as unique but it's humorous and soft, and for someone who hasn't seen 'Business Proposal' would definitely love this book, which makes it a decent read all in all. Honestly, don't put everything similar from the drama, the book will appear plagiarized, even though it's a Fanfiction, I believe creativity is important, else it makes the reader bored because even the humorous elements and the iconic scene where the FL mentions her shoes, even important characters, were taken from the drama.

Writing style: (14.5/15)

I absolutely adore how you add those details of the leads' professions and like every little thing in the story, it makes it appear very realistic. Also, I think this is another story in the chronology of your CEO ffs of each BTS member. (That's a cool and unique thing!) I would suggest not to use a lot of pictures, it somehow distracts the reader's mindset of the story else everything is perfect. Your writing style is top-notch!

"Nobody likes to date a more intelligent girl and you were a science nerd." [ Nothing can be more relatable than this :) ]

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation: (15/15)

I'm impressed that there were almost nil typos, grammatical or punctuation errors. Good work author!

Character development: (12/15)

Jimin sure is a character so full of himself (just like Kang Taemoo from Business Proposal) and female lead too, resembles the character of FL from that drama. This story seriously gives me flashbacks of that Kdrama. I get Jimin's reason for not getting married because the girl died because of him at that time, well I guess that made a deep impact on his mind. That part where they think that Eunoo is the president made me laugh and also, Ol' Park nagging Jimin is pure comedy. (That part when he says that Jimin and Eunoo are dating lmao.) The way he gets angry but even his scoldings are hilarious!

Emotions conveyed: (13/15)

The emotions were conveyed beautifully, the leads are still going through an identity crisis and that just makes it even more funny.

Overall connection as a reader: (6/10)

I liked reading the book but honestly, I was a little bored because I already knew what's going to happen next. This is where creativity is needed. I hope you don't get offended, author, I love your writing style!

Total: (78.5/100)

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Bet? - ryuluvbts 

Book cover: (3.5/5)

The cover is an image placed with typography, the font is cool but I guess the cover appears a little plain.

Book title: (5/5)

Well, both parties (the leads) are somehow at fault and I guess this is how it justifies the title, applies on both sides.

Blurb: (2/5)

The blurb has only dialogues but no descriptions which made me confused but not curious, it felt lacking in emotions and details.

Plot: (8/15)

The plot is cute, soft and melodramatic which makes it a heartwarming read but it's an overused concept. I find every other fanfiction like this.

Writing style: (8/15)

The writing style is a bit plain and lacking in expressing emotions. I can't connect to the plot. Another thing is, this is the YouTube style of writing Fanfictions. Novels (Fanfictions) are written in a descriptive manner with dialogue and expression written along with it.

For eg:

Girl: S-so you never l-loved me?

*Crying* {Excerpt taken from Chapter 1}

A good way to frame this sentence can be;

"S-so you never l-loved me?!" The girl cried asking the male, her heart shattered into bits and pieces.

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation: ( 7/ 15)

I found numerous typos, grammatical and punctuation errors everywhere in the book. I think thorough proofreading and editing is required. I would suggest reading some books. It'll help in enhancing the vocabulary.

Some mistakes I want to point out –

".... *i found him talking to a beautiful girl." [Chapter 1] {'I' is always in capital letter}

"A smirk was __ in his lips." [Chapter 1] {The blank space is for the word left in mid.}

"It's none other than the *maths teacher Mr.Choi." [Chapter 2] {It's either 'math' or 'mathematics'}

"He saw that boy *painted y/n beside the wall..." [Chapter 2]

"... Bell's sound *cutted her words." [Chapter 3] {'Cut' remains 'cut' only in all forms– present, past and past participle}

"A big *blender is going to happen!" [Chapter 8]

Character development: (10/15)

I see Jimin's character has a troubled life even though everyone considers him as perfect, he has his own insecurities and issues in life. But in the midst of all those insecurities and not losing Jay's friendship, he bets on Y/N even though somewhere or the other he's guilty of what he's doing. Definitely, caught in a vicious cycle of toxicity. Y/N comes in like a flicker of joy in his stressed life and that's where his guilt of taking her as a bet kicks in. I absolutely fell for the segment where Y/N says all of this was a bet, giving him a taste of his own medicine.

Some memorable lines—

"If all you felt was sadness till now, then only happiness is now left in your life."

Another thing was pacing, no I don't mind the plot getting rushed as it is a short story, what makes it bland are the timelapses. It makes it look like the character development was lacking.

Emotions conveyed: (10/15)

Though I can understand the plot but I felt the emotions were a bit plain, I guess use of descriptions and rich vocabulary would do the work.

Overall connection as a reader: (5/10)

I liked that Y/N wasn't a victim here, instead she took her revenge and it shows what actions can lead to. Like, I feel mistakes were done on both sides and how both leads made up and learnt from their mistakes.

Total: (58.5/100)

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BTS Oneshot Collection [From Bully to Lovers] - Adorn_Writer 

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Book cover: (2/ 5)

The cover is a simple image placed with text and lacks creativity or connection to the plot.

Book title: (1/5)

Honestly, the title lacks creativity, it feels like a simple statement.

Blurb: (1/5)

The blurb has no connection with the plot and it's just a single line.

Plot: (2/15)

First of all, this is oneshot and so the pacing would be fast but here it doesn't even justify the story, I was so confused throughout the plot. It appeared more like a rough draft than a oneshot because the details were missing. Also, I don't understand why there were so many smut scenes rather than the actual plot? It ain't required there, I guess editing it would do the work. I'll suggest reading some books, it'll help in enhancing vocabulary.

Writing style: (3/15)

The writing style was pretty bland, it took me some time to understand everything and I was unable to connect to the plot.

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation: (2/15)

I found numerous typos, grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the story. Thorough editing and proofreading is required.

Character development: (3/15)

Jimin is a playboy and Y/N is the innocent girl. He even tries to force her to fulfill his lustful desires. They suddenly get married out of nowhere and even get divorced, like it was so, so fast forward it took me a minute to understand everything that was going on. Also, Jimin asks Y/N for forgiveness and she forgives him, I see. Where is the character development? And what impact is this putting on the reader's mind? That one can do whatever he wishes, marry the girl, leave and then come back running after years to apologize and she even forgives! If Jimin's character was shown that he put in efforts to win her trust back or he changed, then I could've liked the character a little but I guess the details were missing.

Emotions conveyed: (2/15)

I couldn't connect to the plot at all and so, the emotions can't be felt by me.

Overall connection as a reader: (2/10)

Dear author, there's no story that can be termed perfect but what makes a story likable is its characters (that have been written in-depth and a reader could understand the concept and theme) and the writing style. I don't mind reading a oneshot, at times I crave for short stories/ oneshots but writing a oneshot doesn't mean making everything so rushed that one couldn't get a grasp of anything that's happening there.

Don't get disheartened as there's always a huge room for improvement, this is just a beginning we have a long way to go. Don't worry, reading a few books would surely help you out! ^^

Total: (18/100)

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SO THE WINNERS ARE -

Third prize goes to

THE WHIMSICAL COQUETTE by strawberry1d 

Second prize goes to

TEMPTATION by Seong_Grace 

AND

First prize goes to

THE MYSTERIOUS PLUSHIE by Noshin7bear 

CONGRATULATIONS TO THE PARTICIPANTS AND THE WINNERS.

DON'T FORGET TO THANK YOUR JUDGE FOR THEIR EFFORTS.

Thanks to everyone for participating and being patient till the results were announced.