RESULTS - KTH
I'm so proud of all the participants. Please don't feel bad after reading the reviews. I promise these are to help you in improving. Also, don't feel bad if you didn't win. You all are talented, no matter if you win or not. Taking part in awards itself is a win for you all.
One more thing, I'm going to come up with the mini awards after I'm done with this. If any of you unfollow me or the judge, you will be blacklisted forever.
The winners will get their prizes once all the results are announced. I'll text you all personally with the prizes.
Now let us check the reviews and then the winners.
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Judge- Hells07dealer
Blood and Ash - SummerCharlton
Book cover (5/5)
The book cover is amazing, it is so well-edited and looks damn perfect.
Book title (5/5)
The book title is unique and interesting, it's really intriguing.
Blurb (4.5/5)
The description is so poetic and referential, even though it's not to the point, it really interests the reader to read the story.
Plot (15/15)
A lot of the chapter is really interesting and amazing, it has so many different and unique ideas and a very good buildup of innovative ideas.
Writing style (14/15)
The writing style is so different yet so unique. It's convincing, beautiful and the way the things are described is very good.
Grammer, vocabulary and punctuation mistakes (13/15)
There are almost no punctuation or grammatical mistakes. You can hardly notice any mistakes throughout the story. The vocabulary used is unique and interesting.
Character development (15/15)
One thing that I like the most about the story is the characters, their personalities, and the way they are developing.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
The story is full of emotions. It displayed so many emotions; pain, fear, anger, cruelty, ruthlessness, everything.
Overall connection with the reader (10/10)
I really enjoyed the story personally and am waiting for the coming chapters. It's so interesting and has a unique plot.
Total (96.5/100)
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The Last Guardian: -agustellar
Book cover (4/5)
The book cover is beautiful and gives amazing and powerful vibes.
Book title (5/5)
The title of the book is simple but it completely fits with the story and moreover with the main lead's personality.
Blurb (5/5)
The description is amazing to me. It will make you get interested at first glance. The description is not a spoiler but intriguing.
Plot (15/15)
The story has one hell of a plot. It's interesting, creative, and innovative, filled with many unique ideas.
Writing style (14/15)
The writing style is simple but attractive, and the sentence formation and the words are indeed very good.
Grammer, vocabulary and punctuation mistakes (14/15)
There are almost no punctuation or grammatical mistakes. The words and the vocabulary used are really amazing. I found a lot of unique and new words. You have used a lot of interesting vocab for the display of emotions.
Character development (13/15)
The characters are very well-defined and so are their personalities, there has not been much development as the story is still going on but then again the characters have great personalities.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
The story has many emotions and most of the emotions are displayed in an amazing way. Also, the words and vocabulary used for the emotions are just wow.
Overall connection with the reader (10/10)
I really liked the story and mostly the theme. I really like an interesting and powerful theme. And this story has provided me with that and it got me hooked to the story.
Total (95/100)
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Love to hatred - Lucandaa
Book cover (3/5)
The book cover is simple and good but maybe you could have used some different tones of colour.
Book title (3/5)
The title of the book is good but it does not fit completely with the story as they did not have any hate for each other, yes they may dislike each other because of a few things but it was not hatred.
Blurb (5/5)
The description is amazing and very well written. It provides a good insight into the story and slowly gives a good amount of interest.
Plot (10/15)
The story has a great plot but the mature parts in very starting without any development of the story and Y/n accepting it as her destiny was not a very good idea. Maybe you can develop their relationship a bit and then it would be perfect.
Writing style (15/15)
The writing style is simple and attractive, it does not feel very different and is very easy to understand.
Grammer, vocabulary and punctuation mistakes (13/15)
There are very few grammatical and punctuation mistakes. The vocabulary is simple but the way it is used to describe the sentences is really creative and good.
Character development (12/15)
The characters have well-developed personalities but Y/n's personality is a little dull for some specific parts, like in the starting she is shown as very bold and strong but the way she let herself get easily carried away just because she thought it was her destiny was a little bit dull moment.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
The emotions in the story are conveyed very well. Nothing seems unreasonable or unrealistic and the way they are displayed is also very good.
Overall connection with the reader (8/10)
The story is very good and the way it is going on, I think there can be a past connection or some fantasy can be involved.
Total (84/100)
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Ocultar - bangtanrewinds
Book cover (4/5)
The book cover is good but it can be more well defined.
Book title (4/5)
The title of the book is amazing. It means disguise which is a unique title and suits with the story.
Blurb (5/5)
The blurb is really amazing and intense. It gives the vibe of mystery and darkness. The blurb is interesting as you may know what happens but not how happened.
Plot (14/15)
The story has a mysterious plot and certainly a good storyline. It is full of unknown twists that you are unknown to. The thing that I like most is when Elle suddenly gets weary of her husband's undefined nature sometimes like when in 1st chapter he told her to name the monster on his name. That was something.
Writing style (13/15)
The writing style is simple and attractive, and is easy to read but maybe you can use dialogues at some points.
Grammer, vocabulary and punctuation mistakes (12/15)
There are almost no grammatical and punctuation mistakes. But you should write in the same tense and if you want to describe a flashback then you may write it in past tense only. As for the vocabulary, it's amazing but not understandable for everyone. The vocabulary is a little hard.
Character development (14/15)
The characters have well-developed but mysterious personalities. Especially Taehyung, you never know what he is or can be until the end, and the same goes for Elle. Well.... it is my way so yeah the characters have personalities really hard to decipher until you read it with full concentration and till the end.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
The emotions are conveyed very well, especially in dreams or nightmares. They feel too real even while reading.
Overall connection with the reader (9/10)
The story is good and I would like to read it completely till the end.
Total (90/100)
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Silent whispers - deewiwi
Book cover (4/5)
The book cover is good but it can be more realistic and well defined.
Book title (5/5)
The title of the book perfectly matches with the story. It has no hint of a flaw.
Blurb (5/5)
The blurb is really amazing and intriguing. You can't even imagine the plot twists the story holds but the way it is conveyed is really brilliant.
Plot (14/15)
The plot of the story is amazing, the way it was written. No one could have truly known what was the mystery. The Kim family was conveyed so well that you never know what they hide behind their cool nature. And the twists that I got one by one simultaneously in the last 5 chapters were just amazing.
Writing style (10/15)
The writing style was good but maybe you could make it a little faster. I know you wanted to make us question our thoughts and idea and be excited for what comes next but it took almost 25 chapters that it became too boring without the truth coming out.
Grammer, vocabulary and punctuation mistakes (12/15)
The vocabulary is good and attractive. There are some grammatical and punctuation mistakes.
Character development (12/15)
The characters were developed well but maybe you should not have rushed the things between Y/n and Seokjin so fast. Their friendship was displayed well but the point was they kissed right after Taehyung gets arrested and Mrs. Kim throws them out. Instead, if you have moved their story more like Jin providing emotional support to Y/n, it could be better.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
The emotions are very well displayed. Maybe Taehyung's love was not fake but his jealousy and angry composure when anything about Jungkook came out was very easily noticeable.
Overall connection with the reader (10/10)
The story was amazing and the ending was truly satisfying.
Total (87/100)
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SO THE WINNERS ARE -
Third prize goes to
OCULTAR by bangtanrewinds
Second prize goes to
THE LAST GUARDIAN by -agustellar
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First prize goes to
BLOOD AND ASH by SummerCharlton
CONGRATULATIONS TO THE PARTICIPANTS AND THE WINNERS.
DON'T FORGET TO THANK YOUR JUDGE FOR THEIR EFFORTS.
Thanks to everyone for participating and being patient till the results were announced.
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