Who is the winner of OT7 category?

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1st prize goes to-

Luring darkness by iworshipbangtan

Points you got- 

Book title- (10/10) 

Reason- (The judges feedback) This is an absolutely unique book title and it carries a mysterious vibes . Gives out an essence of thrill and suspense, specifically crime/dark series lovers (like her) would definitely fall for the name. And it's really a unique one because idk if it's only me(she says) But she have never came across such name before. So definitely 10 on 10.

Story cover: (10/10)

Reason:(The judges feedback) Represents the story very very clearly and beautifully. Neither too messy, nor too simple. Just as it should be. Very aesthetically pleasing and satisfying cover for a book that revolves around mystery and thrill. Carries the ability to enhance the suspense among readers. Very good work! And it's connected with the book title .

Story description: (20/20) 

Reason: (Judges feedback) She can only describe the description with one word that is- "Perfect". Not too wordy, neither too naive. Builds up tension among the readers and definitely doesn't gives away too much of the plot, not too bland either. The description is definitely the first thing that lured (no pun intended) her towards the story.

Grammar- (20/20) 

Reason: (Judges feedback) Perfect! It's hard to believe for the judge that English isn't your first language .

Spelling- (10/10) -

Reason- (judges feedback) She couldn't find any spelling error , not even a careless one Usually writers mess up words like realize (realise) and r  (receive)  but those are also perfect books.  She is genuinely impressed.

Story flow- (9/10)-

Reason- (judges feedback) She would have given you 10 / 10 but she found out the story starting a little slow. But she took consideration that nothing much happened ( which is good thing as the story seems organized and not messy because of that) to add to the complications of the mystery makes the story even more pleasant. The pace of the remaining story was absolutely perfect. The tension piling up in every chapter literally hold the capability holds the capability of typing the reader to the book and once can't leave until the readers reads till the very end. 

Writing skills: (10/10)-

 Reason: (judges feedback) very very very beautiful! Immaculate! Nothing more. Yes, there is room for improvement obviously and maybe more professional writers than me could suggest on such matters. (she says) But to her, it's stupendous.

 Enjoyment: (10/10)

Reason: (judges feedback)She would definitely wait for your next book. That exhibits her enjoyment she think. A fantastic read! If she felt good after reading the story: Good will be worse than an understatement. She felt thrilled, goosebumps covered her skins at few chapters. The twist and the pace...honestly she is speechless. A book worth of recommendation, specifically for mystery lovers.

Total points you got- 99.5/100

From host- 

Your book is really good @iworshipbangtan I don't know how to explain it. But you reallydeserve first place ; take care and congo again. 🎉🎉

2nd place goes to -

Symbols of magic by hogwartsjunior

Points you got-

 title: 10/10

Reason- (judges feedback) very interesting title, She usually don't stumble upon such titles. so it's definitely a very impressive and interesting one.

 Cover: 9/10 

Reason- ( judges feedback) The cover is beautiful but it's a little messy for her . also, the font is not very appealing to her. She bet the cover can be better. 

Description: 20/20

Reason- (judges feedback) Fantastic description. Neither too long, nor too short, aroused curiosity in  her. Good job with the description. 

 Grammar: 20/20

Reason- ( judges feedback) Flawless. perfect tenses and all other grammatical rules are followed properly. and in chapter 12, "you want to hear it from her" (the last line), She guess that would be "you wanted to hear" (if she not too wrong).

 Spelling: 10/10. 

Reason- (judges feedback) No spelling mistakes. Impressive very impressive. She really got impressed (sometimes envious too) easily with people who manages to avoid careless spelling mistakes lol. Your book genuinely made her very impressed. 

 Story flow: 10/10.

Reason- (judges feedback) Beautiful flow. the story pace is perfect and keeps a reader interested till the very end. perfect pace of the story.

Writing skills: 10/10.

Reason-(judges feedback) Aesthetic. She's amazed by how aesthetic of a writer you are. She really couldn't find a proper adjective to compliment your writing. Very very impressive and beautiful. However that's one thing that's looking a bit unprofessional. In chapter 3, in the first dialogue, too many ellipsis (......) are used, it could be shortened to minimum 3 or 4 dots, and the effect of that would be exactly same on the readers. Too many dots seems unnecessary and unprofessional too. 

Enjoyment: 10/10.

 Reason-(judges feedback) The range of vocabulary, the unique storyline, versatility, proper punctuations and grammar, perfect pace and the perfect length of paragraphs leaves no space for any reader to 'not' enjoy this absolute masterpiece. She's definitely going to check out more of your stories 

Total points you got- 99/100 (actually for the dots and for cover but you can even get 9.5 or 9.6 but for the dots it was looking unprofessional so she gave you 99 but I hope you're very happy)

Host- 

It was a very good , the judges finished reading so fast that means think your book is so much interesting and good I hope you don't loose your hope and keep your work . Thank you and Congo again 🎉🎉

3rd prize goes to -

Dark paradise by idyllickook 

 The points you got-

Title: 10/10 -  

Reason- (judges feedback) A very unique title. Aroused curiosity within her. And as a fan of spiritual and supernatural matters, the title literally lured me towards the book. Paradise has always been glorified in every kind of fictions, but this is probably the very first book where paradise is not something made up of sugar and everything nice, rather it's portrayed as a 'sweetened knife'. Very impressive.

 Cover: 9/10 - 

Reason- (judges feedback )  The cover is beautiful and attractive but the only thing she don't find eye catching is the edit of the person over the background. The background is beautiful and so are the fonts, but only that edit is kinda off to her. 

Description: 20/20 - 

Reason- (judges feedback ) Immaculate! Amazing description, really amazing. She strongly believe that the description can easily attract any reader towards the book. Very well done with the description.

 Grammar: 19.5/20-

Reason- (judges feedback) Fantastic grammar. No tense mistakes, no grammatical errors which enhanced the quality of the story and didn't disturb my reading flow. But, in chapter 2 'little did they knew' is incorrect, because did is already conveying the fact that the line is being spoken in past. So the correct sentence would be "little did they know". Also, "leaving his only daughter is this world" sounds a little awkward, I think the right sentence is "daughter in this world". Same with chapter 3, "he didn't needed pity" is not correct, "he didn't need" is. [I also faced the problem of this 'did' and past tense a lot while I was in high school lol]

Spelling: 10/10.

Reason (judges feedback) Not even one spelling mistake. How can you not make even one spelling mistake?" Teach me please lol" she said.

 Story flow: 10/10.

Reason- (judges feedback) Amazing and perfect! Let me keep it short and let only those two words describe my opinions about the story flow (she said) . The story provided her chills in every single chapter .

Total points you got-(98.5/100)  

Host- 

I can't believe you all are so good 🥺🥺 Not even a spelling mistake , not even a grammar mistake , your cover was fantastic . I couldn't explain I don't know how can you all do these but keep it up. If it comes to me 😅😅 idk how much useless I write , there are no endings of wrong spellings , don't say the name of grammar I'm the worst in grammar but I'm happy with what I am and I am sure you all are also oh well nevermind and ya congo again 🎉🎉

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Judges- 

1st place goes to-

Moonchild9403 

2nd place goes to -

YoBts0 

Congo to all participants and judges and d/m me to receive your prizes φ(゜▽゜*)♪