Not me......

What if Squirrelflight chose ashfur over brambleclaw?

Brambleclaw felt his paws tingling with curiosity on who Squirrelflight will choose to be her mate. "Ashfur, brambleclaw...." Both of the toms got up to see a beautiful ginger she-cat with luscious green eyes staring at them. "I-I chose who will be my mate," she walked over to the toms and pressed her nose gently to ashfur's nose. "I choose you ashfur,I love you"ashfur purred so loud that it hurt brambleclaw's ears and with that the two cat left with their tails twinned,brambleclaw sat there with a broken heart, why him,why not me?,am I just not good enough!?. Brambleclaw wanted to ask Squirrelflight why she chose ashfur instead of him,so later that night when he found her alone in the forest he asked her. "Squirrelflight" "yes?" "Why'd you chose him, and not me?" The she-cat looked up at him, "you weren't really paying attention to me and ashfur well he was there for me when I needed him the most,and all you see in me is a troublesome-kit!, sure you payed attention to me but only for awhile unlike ashfur,he doesn't see me the way you do,he always agrees with me and he loves me for who I am,he even brings me flowers! And you never done that! Why? I thought you liked me" "I did like you! I still do!" "Doesn't look like it,brambleclaw you had your chance and you blew it,now I definitely know I made the right choice" she hissed "Squirrelflight please give me another chance I promise it will be different please Squirrelflight please!" "No,I told you that you had a chance and you blew it,me and ashfur are mates whether you like it or not!" She meowed coldly and walked away.

"BADGERS ARE HEADED FOR THE CAMP!" Brambleclaw saw three badgers charging into camp, he unsheathed his claws getting prepared to fight until he heard a high pitched screech he turned around and saw a big badger in front of Squirrelflight, should I help her?,No she betrayed you by taking ashfur as a mate! Brambleclaw stared at Squirrelflight with emotionless eyes "Brambleclaw what are you doing?! Help her!" Screeched ashfur who was fighting a badger single pawed. Brambleclaw pretended he didn't hear ashfur and ran into battle,in the corner of his eye he saw ashfur brake away from the badger to help Squirrelflight,I could have done that easily!, then he saw cats flood the camp windclan,shadowclan, and riverclan! Cats from all clans! Cats fought the badgers ferociously and before you know it the badgers were driven out for good.

"Firestar!!" "Yes Squirrelflight?" "I'm expecting kits!,ashfur's kits!" Sandstorm got up immediately and licked Squirrelflight repeatedly "congratulations Squirrelflight! I'm so proud of you" as Squirrelflight's parents were congratulating her brambleclaw growled Squirrelflight was already expecting ashfur's kits?! They just becam mates a moon ago! Firestar must have realized brambleclaw's unhappiness because after talking to Squirrelflight he came up to him. "I know how you feel if makes you feel any better I can make you deputy, I don't think graystripe is coming back" he mewed sadly "Y-y mean it?!" Firestar nodded "I think you deserve it" xxxxxxxxxxxxx

"I heard you were made deputy brambleclaw" "shut up hawkfrost but it's true,how long do you think tigerstar is going to take I want to talk with him" "About what brambleclaw" sneered tigerstar

Squirrelflight was sleeping in the nursery with ferncloud and daisy.Tigerstar appeared out of nowhere, "tigerstar what are you doing here?!" "Son don't you remember the plan?" "I do but I was going to do it myself!" The moonlight shone through the dark forest cat, "I know,but I came to watch remember you have to savor the moment,claw her slowly but deeply go as deep as you claws can go,touch her bones" tigerstar purred brambleclaw nodded and headed toward the nursery.He walked up to Squirrelflight and clawed her shoulder deeply then her side,Squirrelflight started to move she slowly opened her eyes,brambleclaw fleet and curled in his nest. Squirrelflight wailed in pain and shock,she woke up most of the clan brambleclaw pretended to be asleep, "what happened?" "Squirrelflight are you ok?" "She's bleeding!" "Who did this!?" The last mew was firestar,who had a troubled look in his eyes.He examined her scratches,they were very deep her whole shoulder was matted with blood and her side was bleeding so much that her nest was getting soaked with blood "Squirrelflight!!,my love are you ok?!(gasp) you side is bleeding!,it's too close to you belly! It could harm the kits!" Ashfur screeched brambleclaw purred when he heard about the risk of the kits lives. "Yes my son,this is the pleasure you reserve!" Tigerstar purred In brambleclaw's ear, "but my son,this is just the beginning of your revenge!"