Romance Results
First of all, I would like to say congratulations to every single one of the participants. Putting yourself out there is not easy, and I commend you for it. I would also like to give one last shoutout to kek_lee_writes and Siya_Stark3000 for their incredible work. I genuinely cannot thank them enough.
Now, the moment you've been waiting for.
I am posting everyone's breakdown (averaged from 2 judges). A couple of participants will get a review, which can also be DM'd to the author upon request. Participants, you might be DM'd with the option to receive advice. You are welcome to refuse or to ask for it later. If you're not DM'd about advice, you may go to your judges to ask for additional comments, but I can't promise anything. Winners, please DM me your email so I can send the stickers over. Judges, please follow the winner of your genre.
And now, it is my privilege to announce the results for romance for Season 3 of the Borderverse Awards.
10. 31? by LavanyaSwamy
Cover/Title: 2.5/5
Dialogue: 3/5
Blurb: 1.5/5
Grammar: 15.5/20
Plot: 14.5/20
Characters: 15/20
Style: 14/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 69/100
9. Kidnapped by Mafia by hooWoman
Cover/Title: 2.75/5
Dialogue: 3/5
Blurb: 3.25/5
Grammar: 16/20
Plot: 15.5/20
Characters: 16.5/20
Style: 15.5/20
Personal: 2.5/5
Total: 75/100
8. Road Not Taken by SylRose18
Cover/Title: 4/5
Dialogue: 4/5
Blurb: 3/5
Grammar: 17.5/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 18/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 86/100
7. Pride, Prejudice, Action! by shellzels
Cover/Title: 4/5
Dialogue: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 18.5/20
Plot: 18.5/20
Characters: 17.5/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 88/100
5. 10 Ways to Get Over Lana Heart by ily_ari_grande (tie)
Cover/Title: 4.5/5
Dialogue: 4.5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 18/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 4.5/5
Total: 89.5/100
5. HEADLINE by normalsandwich (tie)
Cover/Title: 4.5/5
Dialogue: 4.5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 18/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 18/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 89.5/100
4. I Saved the Bridesmaid by alannaxgrey
Cover/Title: 3.5/5
Dialogue: 4.5/5
Blurb: 2.5/5
Grammar: 19/20
Plot: 19/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 18.5/20
Personal: 4.5/5
Total: 90/100
3. Paint Me Saved by wanderedwriter
Cover/Title: 3.5/5
Dialogue: 4.5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 19/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 19/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 90.5/100
2. Pain and Pleasure by Geegervy
Cover/Title: 4.5/5
Dialogue: 5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 18/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 19/20
Style: 18/20
Personal: 4.5/5
Total: 91/100
1. The Hunchback's Perfect Family by LynaForge
Cover/Title: 4.5/5
Dialogue: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 19/20
Plot: 19/20
Characters: 19/20
Style: 19/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 93/100
Starting from cover, the cover is we can say vector or more like silhouette based. Nowadays I have encountered many stories with such styled covers. But this was unique. Because there were three silhouettes on the cover. One girl, one boy, and two figures fighting on simple blue background. I think they represent some scenes of the story. The fonts were perfectly clear and readable. Dialogues were perfectly sorted throughout the story. Clear and loud. The blurb was very much informative and simple. I suggest adding some sentences or dialogues from the story. But nonetheless, cool. I think you can edit the excessive use of '--' according to me. Grammar was nearly perfect. I didn't find any major flaw in it. Some minor punctuations were a bit amiss according to me. But nothing too serious. The plot here was excellent. The fantastical aspect of the human son of fairies and an Ogre was something new and different. First Fanli; the female Ogre met the Hunchback's family when she was a kid. The wife gifting her clothes and all. Then she wanted to marry her son, and she saw the wedding which left her heartbroken and so on. The plot was definitely engaging and great. Characters were all part of the fantasy and amazing. The families; both Ogre and fairies had their own flaws and plus points. Each of the characters was intriguing. Overall, a bit of element can be added in the writing style but the story was amazing. I definitely enjoyed reading it. Great job!
The title is relevant to the overarching plot of the story, but it is not very catchy. I love your cover. The colors used are appealing and no unnecessary elements are present. The blurb hits the nail on the head. It gives readers something to sink their teeth into, but not too much that the element of mystery is lost. Well done. Your grammar is admirable. Your writing style in particular caught my eye. Every word is well thought out, and the way you craft your sentences is very beautiful. There's so much to learn from you. Your plot is well-paced. You give us just enough information to satisfy us, and at the same time keep us wondering what's coming next. Your Characters are three-dimensional. They were relatable and I found myself empathizing with them every now and again. This was an enjoyable read. Keep writing.
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