1st position

Book Name - Blooming hearts by Euphoric_18

Reviewer/Judge- mahaenterprises

Total marks- 37.5/40

Title(5/5)

Title is so beautiful one, "blooming hearts" apt for the story. You really related this title to story, its so soothing the love that is blooming. Well done.

Cover(4.5/5)

Cover is so beautiful, the font is nice, the title is clearly seen. But Samaina picture is behind, the title covered the whole page, so I think you can slightly change the cover, making samaina face in front as many will not recognise it in first look.

Blurb(5/5)

I really appreciate you for this, you really gave a nice description about story. It so beautiful, I really got interest to read it. You even added the characters sketch there which also clarifies the doubts. Good one on Blurb.

Plot(4.5/5)

The plot is awesome and very emotional too. Love blooming between samaina has started slowly, very emotional in the story you describe so well, not more or less it's on the track. I wish the plot goes like this throughout the story without any lag.

Characters(4.5/5)

Good one, you gave character sketch separately in description side not inside the book separately and mentioned two important characters. I suggest you to add characters inside the book too, as it is a long story. It will help the readers to understand while going through chapters.

Grammar(4.5/5)

Your grammar is so good. The way you describe things is  beautiful. Somewhere there are  few mistakes which is to be corrected. I suggest you to do proofreading once you done with the draft, it may help and also give gap between few paragraphs you explain, in some places there is no linespace. Otherwise all good.

Flow(5/5):-

The flow of the story is so good, I really liked it from Prologue to last chapter, there is no lag in between. You explained even the small things clearly without rushing up. Its so good. I hope it goes on like this till the end.

Overall(4.5/5)

As a reader, the story is awesome. Really loved it. Plot is very amazing. Very emotional too. All the emotions showed perfectly. Nanu and Sammer's bonding was awesome. Spelling mistakes are the there which need to corrected and grammar is also good. Very interesting  story. Really wanted to read more. Characters were tooo good. But it lacks reader attention, so I suggest you to share your stories with all which may help your story to reach more people. I hope my review helped you, Please look after the points I mention, which may help you in future stories. Thankq write more story, keep growing as Writer.

2nd position

Book name - Samaina at Hogwarts by RishikaShrivastava

Reviewer/Judge- mahaenterprises

Total marks- 34/40

Title(4/5):-

Title is good but common one. But it's something you tried newly and by seeing the title readers can easily get to know what the story is about, "Hogwarts". I think you can come up with a better title though.

Cover(3.5/5)

Cover is  nice and attractive. It's so related to the title. The picture you used and the font is so good. but the story starts from childhood right, Samaina being 11years, you directly gave picture of Samaina being all grown up. I think you must first add their childhood, then gradually add the next picture. Otherwise your cover is nice and relatable.

Blurb(3/5)

There is not much description on this story. As it common story, you didn't describe much about it. Readers always read description first, some people might not know this story too. so I suggest you to add something in your introduction or description side.

Plot(5/5):

Plot is good as you took from movie you inspired, you even took the plot nicely throughout the story. I hope it goes like this till the end.

Characters(4.5/5)

You  described all important characters first, its good. You shown their importance, mainly I appreciate you, that you explained few new words black colour. It good.

Grammar(4.5/5)

Your grammar is good, only  punctuation you need to correct. I personally feel using emoji throughout the story may irritate some readers. Using emoji one or two place is good but throughout it may be irritating. I hope you have a look at that.

Flow(5/5)

I really appreciate you for this, there was no flow break or  skip of  scene thinking readers already know that.I hope you take this story like this too the end.

Overall(4.5/5)

Being a reader, I really enjoyed your story, you took more efforts to collect pictures related to story. I really enjoyed owl scene coming in three chapter and Sameer twins scenes, it's so good. And the story too was going great  and giving your full effeort I can see, from pictures to flow you did well. Keep it up. I hope you keep all the points in your mind.
I personally love your story, I hope my review helped you, Please look after the points I mention, which may help you in future. Thankq write more story, keep growing as Writer.

There is a tie for 3rd position

3rd position

Book name- Main phir bhi tomko chahungi by shambhavisontakke

Reviewer/Judge- mahaenterprises

Total marks- 32/40

Title (4/5)

Title is apt for story but its common. I see many story in wattpad with same title, I suggest you to try something new.

Cover(3.5/5):-

Cover is Second thing which attract readers to get interest in the story. The cover is nice, the picture, Samaina's sad face and title say it's sad/emotional story. But the font is not much clear, I think the cover must be more creative, and use big and clear font which will attract people.

Blurb(2/5):-

I am so disappointed as I find one line description. This is first thing which makes readers to get interest in our story. But you finished it in one line. I think you should add few more points and make readers to have a look. I suggest you to change the description soon.

Plot(5/5):-

I was disappointed when I found one line description, But your story is really awesome with good plot and emotional part. Story was little curious. Because as per the title of the story I thought something will happen to Naina. But nothing happened as Sameer saved her. So story was going too well. In 7 chapters all the emotions of family, friends, love are beautifully shown.

Characters(4/5):-

As this is a short story separate character sketch is not given, but readers can understand it is a samaina story, and while reading all characters are as in show, but I didn't understand
Whether they are alive or not, because you mentioned about Naina's father but he didn't come in story. Sorry if I was wrong in that, I didn't understand that part.

Grammar(4/5)

As you have used Hindi dialogue there were not much mistake in it, but still there were few grammar mistake and punctuation errors. I think you will look after it, after drafting give a proof-read to it, it will help you.

Flow(5/5)

As I told you ,your plot is awesome, An emotional story. I appreciate you  for balancing it very well like not more emotional or less, it is at correct flow. I really liked it. Awesome story.

Overall(4.5/5)

Overall as a reader I love your story. It is so emotional and nice. I appreciate you for not breaking the flow and emotional scenes were kept in limit too. There are few characters which I didn't understand, as they not present in story, you also  didn't mention whether they are alive or not, as readers who read newly may not know it.And try some more catchy description which will attract readers. Try to change cover and description.
I hope my review helped you, Please look at the points I mention, which may help you in future. Thankq. write more story, keep growing as Writer. 

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3 rd position

Book name - I can't love you by Doraashi

Reviewer/Judge- Pournu

Total marks- (32/40)

Title: (3.5/5)

Its a intriguing title, I must say. Will there be a happy ending? Let’s peek in.

Cover (4.5/5)

Nice cover. It was like pieces of puzzle coming together. Does it give us a hint towards story line? Let’s have a look.

Blurb (3/5)

Strangers to soulmates is not a new concept but what us different here that makes your story stand out from others? Let's have a look.

Plot/ story line: (5/5)

Everything from love at first sight to heart break every emotion was beautifully penned down. Naina’s identity was a twist I didn’t expect. Good job on the plot.

Characters(4/5)

Each character had a role to play. From the dabbha wale sardarji to Naina all the characters were beautiful.

Grammar (4/5)

It was simple easy to read but found some places where you could improve a bit.

Flow of writing (4/5)

I like your flow of writing. Keep up the good work.

Overall (4/5)

A story with a unique plot and also the bond of friendship and self hate each wonderful emotions.  It was like watching a movie. You kept us hooked up until the very end with your twists and turns. A wonderful read I must say.

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REMAINING REVIEWS

Book name:- galthi by shambhavisontakke

Reviewer - mahaenterprises

Title(4.5/5)

Title is something new, good too. After seeing the title readers may have some idea what the story is about. So I suggest to keep even more creative and catchy title which may attract all.

Cover(3/5)

Cover is so simple , they are some mistake, only half of the cover is seen. The title and half cover is only seen. Readers can't understand the title much in cover, I suggest you to change the cover fast, which will be attractive and use a nice font.

Blurb(3.5/5)

Description is more important in a story, which makes reader to get an interest in reading our book. You have written well about it, but I think you should add some more details. You describe the story in one line at last. But the reader who reading it for first time won't be able to understand.

Plot(3/5)

After all this I came into the Story, but I really didn't understand few points, why Sameer is angry at Naina, I know it short story but you easily made everything normal between them. First part he was so angry at her, but at third part he was easily convinced and started talking to her. I didn't know why there was a fight or what reason. I didn't understand the plot itself, as a reader I suggest you to always introduce the plot first when u take from a serial directly, you first have introduce I starting this story from this episode, as for new reader they might not know.

Characters(3/5)

There is no separate characteristics given, but by reading the story fully readers can understand story revolves mostly around sameer, Naina and her family. Good one.

Grammar (4/5)

Your grammar is good throughout the story, but I see some spelling mistake which needs to corrected. I suggest you to proofread the draft once you done.

Flow(3/5):

Flow of the story is nice but like I said I understand the plot properly. You took the story as you imagined, they fight, their family comes and a festival where Naina faints and they became one. But the main thing is why the fight or for what reason they fought that part could be described better.

Overall (3/5)

As a reader I didn't understand your plot, many questions are there why Samaina fight, by reading your description it shows that you took from serial directly  but you must have described it shortly in your first chapter then it would be easy for readers.  Galthi, the title apt with the plot now, Naina did something but you must  describe it. So even a first time reader will know why they fight. And another thing I notice is you easily patched up. Galthi -topic itself say he/she has done some mistake, so you must  explain things  Naina did to gain Sameer's forgiveness. In this story it was fast, so please look into these points. Your grammar is good only spelling error, if you do proofreading then it would be helpful to you. You need to change the cover and description soon.
I hope my review helped you, Please look after the points I mention, which may help you in future stories.

Total marks- (27/40)

Book name - Suman : A bundle of fortune by samaina_fan_samaina

Reviewer- JuhiMehta268

Title (4/5)

Title was good going with the storyline but not enough to catch the attention of the readers. This title lacked creativity.

Cover (3/5)

The cover is very simple one it was lacking the creativity the colour of the font also was not going with the background and the pictures can be more better.

Blurb (4/5)

Blurb was nice. It was giving the outline of story ,but there was some grammatical mistakes. you should have a look and correct it. Overall a nice blurb

Plot (3.5/5)

Plot was common. its showing how after the birth of suman every relation gets jelled back again but  I like the way how you tried to add your creativity in the chapters. So a very good job here

Grammar (3/5)

You have to work on your grammar there were so many mistakes punctuation were missing ,and also typos. It was somehow breaking the flow of reading.

Characters (3.5/5)

The charcter development was good but the connection with the charcters were missing I was not able to feel their emotions. It was going in a very fast pace.

Flow of writing (3/5)

Though it is a short story, the flow was fast. Because of that, I was not able to connect with the characters.

Overall (3.5/5)

Overall it's a nice story the plot was common but your creativity definitely enhances it.  Also try to give long chapters, as the length of the chapters were short.

Total (27.5/40)

Zarurat by RRao_13

Reviewer- JuhiMehta268

Title- (3/5)

Title was very common. There was no creativity, while selecting the title. It could be much better.

Cover (4/5)

Cover is very nice the fonts colors and background everything was very nice. A sad or emotional picture of Samaina will make the cover perfect

Blurb (3.5/5)

There was just one quote in the blurb but it was very apt for the story. A little more addition to the blurb will make it more eye catchy for the readers.

Plot(3.5/5)

Plot was common sameer chooses his friends over naina after he realizes his fault there are so many stories with this plot in the wattpad, so there was nothing new with the plot,but You presented it really well.

Characters (4/5)

You portrayed your characters very well.

Grammar (4/5)

Grammar was simple and easy to read some punctuation mistakes were there some editing and it will be perfect.

Flow of writing (4/5)

Flow was good it was not breaking anywhere but there is a always need of improvement in grammar and flow of writing.

Overall (3.5/5)

It was nice story to read the plot can be much better but the way u wrote it was commendable some editing and it will be perfect.

Total -( 29.5/40)

Book name - Tuje se hi Ashiqui by _yesha_jain_

Reviewer - Pournu

Title: 4/5

A nice title. Gave us an hint that it’s gonna be a love story between them yet a common one though but Let’s see how love blooms.

Cover:3/5

A nice cover. But could get a little more creative with it.

Blurb 3/5

You can be a little more descriptive in blurb as it is important to pique readers interest.

Plot(4/5)

The plot was cliche one but your creativity and ideas definitely enhances your book.

Characters 4/5

The father daughter bonding is a sight to behold. The way she cares for her parents and at the same time the internal feelings she has is a nice one. Even Sameer’s parents were lovely. The way he cares for her ❤️ just takes my heart away.

Grammar 3.5/5

It was simple and easy to read. It had an emotional connect with me. But when it comes to grammar there is always room for improvement.

Flow of writing 4/5

You have a good flow of writing. Keep up the good job.

Overall: 4/5

It was a nice story. Though the plot was cliché your way of writing was different. It shows your uniqueness as a writer. Thanks for the wonderful read and strong female lead

Total marks- (30.5/40)

Book name - Lost and Found by Doraashi

Reviewer - Pournu

Title (4/5)

A good title. It gives an idea of what it might be at the same time it manages to increase the curiosity as well. Good job on the title.

Cover: (3.5/5)

It was a nice cover but you could be a bit more creative with it.

Blurb:  (3.5/5)

It was a good blurb. Something  different from the stories I have read. Good job on the description. Let’s see what the journey entails.

Plot (4/5)

Redemption plot is always difficult to write but the journey to redemption was beautiful ❤️. And the credit goes to you as a writer.

Character (4/5)

The characters were beautifully portrayed. The friendship between the best friends was admirable. A friend like Kabir is hard to find. And the bond between Sameer and Naina was rendered beautifully. His bonding with Nanu is lovely. Good job on the characters.

Grammar (4/5)

It was a good read but had some typos and some grammatical errors do proofread once so that it can be perfect for readers. Your vocabulary is also nice.

Flow of writing :( 4/5)

It was executed well and I couldn’t feel the flow breaking at any point of the story. Good job on that.

Overall (4/5)

It was something new from typical high school sweetheart stories. Something new and refreshing 🙂

Total:31/40.

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