1st position

Book name - The Groom Choice by RishikaShrivastava

Reviewer/Judge- chocolategirlj26

Total marks- (33/40)

Title : (5/5)
It was totally apt for the story.

Cover : (5/5)
The cover is perfect no changes needed.

Blurb : (3/5)

Blurb could be more better and little bit short.

Plot (5/5)

I love the plot and that trailer was amazing.

Characters (4/5)

You portrayed the characters well

Grammar (3/5)

Grammer can taken care of. there were typos errors , punctuation marks missing in few places instead of it author used (....) and so many emoji are used.

Flow (4/5)

Flow is good.

Overall (4/5) :

Superb story , enjoyed reading it but still some editing is must to make the whole story interesting.

2nd position

Book name- Samaina Love by samaina_fan_samaina

Reviewer/Judge- chocolategirlj26

Total marks- (31/40)

Title :- (4/5)

Title is apt to the storyline but the same title already taken by someone.

Cover :- (4/5)

It's beautiful but title is not highlight , it seems like a dim one.

Blurb :- (4/5)

Blurb is good but has some typos errors / some words are Missing in middle, do edit it.

Plot :- (4/5)

Though the plot is common, the way you have written the story makes it very interesting.

Characters :- (4/5)

You portrayed the characters well.

Grammar :- (3/5)

Grammatical mistakes,typos errors and punctuation marks missing in few places after half of the story as well as instead of it author used (....) In many places.

Flow :- (4/5)

It was moderate

Overall :- (4/5)

I'm in love with this story and enjoyed reading it , specially samaina romance , it gives me a goosebumps, but still some editing is must to make the whole story perfect.

3rd Position

Book name - Beyond Broken by Psr1403

Reviewer/Judge- chocolategirlj26

Total marks- (30/40)

Title :- (3.5 /5)

The title is apt to the storyline but it's common as many authors in wattpad named their book "BEYOND BROKEN" , so you go for something little more creative.

Cover :- (3/5)

Nice cover but its not apt to the story line , author name and the word broken are not visible clearly.

Blurb :- (4/5)

Blurb is good it is giving the outline of the story.

Plot :- (5/5)

I love plot , I felt it's unique (different comparing to other samaina ffs)

Characters (4/5)

You played the each characters well but still there is a mystery for few

Grammar (3/5)

Typos error were there , less grammatical mistakes , punctuation marks are missing in few places and author used (....) in many places so you need some editing after that it will be perfect.

Flow (4/5)

Flow is in correct pace, I didn't felt like it's fast nor slow or it breaks in mid.

Overall (4/5)

I loved all the parts till now and enjoyed reading it , the plot and the way you execute was perfect but still
some editing is must to make the whole story perfect.

Congratulations to all the winners ♥️

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REMAINING REVIEWS

1.Book name: Rishtey by mansi0809

Reviewer/Judge- MananXPaniMyLife

Title. 3/5

Title is good, but I think it is not that attractive. Somewhere, it is not gaining attention. It is appropriate for story, but could be more better.

Cover. 4/5

Cover is beautiful and it also matches the story. Fonts are also awesome.

Blurb: 4/5

Blurb is written beautifully, words used are good. Via blurb you showed about their life. And somewhere it connects the readers with storyline.

Plot: 3/5

Plot is good and different. I haven't read story with this kind of plot in Samaina fandom. It was unique, but I think you could have executed it in a better way.

Characters: 3/5

Character development is pretty good. You have shown the characters in a good way. But somewhere I didn't feel the connection with characters.

Grammar: 2/5

I found many grammatical mistakes. It needs lots of correction in grammar. I would advise you to get your book edited.

Flow: 4/5

Flow of story is pretty good. Everything is moving in good pace, you are giving time for character development, it's a good thing. Because, sometimes people rush it too much.

Overall: 3.5/5

Overall, it's a good story with different concept. It was fun reading this book. It just needs some polishing.

Total: 26.5/40

2.Book : Dil ka Dariya by RRao_13

Reviewer/Judge- MananXPaniMyLife

Title. 4/5

Title is quite good. It shows creativity and concept of story too. It also attracts the readers, so good work in title selection.

Cover: 4/5

Cover is amazing. Fonts and pics are awesome and it also represents storyline. It definitely attracts readers.

Blurb: 1.5/5

There is nothing in blurb except two lines saying it is story about arrange marriage. I think, blurb is very important part of book, because after cover and title people first read blurb and it decides if they will read story further or not.

Plot: 3.5/5

Plot is quite common. Story is about arrange marriage of Samaina and how they starts thier new life with each other and support each other. But yes, you have represented in quite good manner.

Characters: 3/5

You have done good work in character description and development. I didn't feel connection, but still it was pretty good.

Grammar: 3.5/5

Grammar is pretty good. I found some grammatical mistakes, but they are not too much and don't irritate readers while reading. But I would definitely advice you to proofread before publishing chapters.

Flow: 3/5

Flow of story is good. Everything is going on in smooth manner and good pace.

Overall: 3.5/5

Overall, good concept. I had good time reading it.

Total. 26/40

3.Book: Kuch Ankahi Baatein by KRV2020

Reviewer/Judge- MananXPaniMyLife

Title. 4/5

Title is good and intensive. It definitely creates good impression on reader.

Cover. 2/5

Cover is just a pic of Samaina, it doesn't even have title. I think you should try something else.

Blurb: 1/5

There is nothing written in blurb except it is another story of in which their relation starts from school.

Plot: 4/5

Plot is good and interesting. It is also executed in good manner.

Characters: 3/5

Characters were developed beautifully. I really liked your way of describing characters.

Grammar. 3/5

Grammar is pretty good. But I found many grammatical mistakes in narration and spellings. It can be rectified as they are not too much.

Flow: 4/5

Flow of story is good and moving in good pace.

Overall: 3.5/5

Overall it was fun reading this book. First expression was not much good, but as I started reading I really liked it.

Total. 24.5/40

4.Book:. Life ho to aise by khushibhatt15102

Reviewer/Judge- MananXPaniMyLife

Title. 3/5

Title is definitely something, which makes us happy. It gives us a masti waali feeling but can be more interesting.

Cover: 2/5

Cover is good, but not that much. Pics are blur and it is just a simple collab of four pics and it doesn't even have title on it. But it definitely matches with title and story.

Blurb. 1/5

There is no particular blurb.

Plot: 3/5

Plot is good. It is story about fun and love between ten friends or I should say group of Samaina, which contains some other fandom too. It is kinda fun reading this book. But yes, I think execution could be much better.

Characters: 2/5

I think there is lack in character development, as I really didn't understand the feelings of characters. It is very important to develop characters, if we want readers to keep reading.

Grammar. 2/5

I found tons of mistakes in grammar, Do have a look at your grammar and try improving. But with time it will get better.

Flow: 2/5

I didn't think flow of story was much good as everything was going so fast without any development.

Overall. 3/5

Overall, plot you have chosen is good and different but it could be represented in much better way by some polishing.

Total. 18/40

5.Book: Na sikha Mai Jeena humdum by SamainaStoryBooth

Reviewed by MananXPaniMyLife

Title. 3/5

Title is kinda filmy, readers like filmy titles. But people expect something different too. It represents the storyline as it is about separation.

Cover. 4/5

I really liked the cover. It is beautiful, unique and somewhere related too.

Blurb: 3/5

Blurb is of two line, but yes it is something which can make readers thinking and curious about Story.

Plot: 3/5

Plot is good, different, and interesting. It is also executed in good manner.

Characters: 3/5

I felt lack in character development, as if Samaina are separating and if you want readers to feel that we have to describe it in words which you haven't done.

Grammar. 2.5/5

I found many mistakes in grammar. I would advise that if you want readers to feel emotions, then describe it in words, using emojis look a little unproffesional.

Flow: 3/5

Story is moving in good flow. Everything is going on pretty well.

Overall: 3.5/5

Overall, it is good book and just needs some polishing.

Total. 25/40

6.Book: Tere Liye Samaina by Anjaan0210

Reviewed by MananXPaniMyLife
Title: 3/5

Good selection of title, as it represents storyline, it makes us feel intrigued yet very common though.

Cover: 4/5

Cover is beautiful. Make us feel attracted towards book and its related to the storyline too.

Blurb: 3.5/5

Blurb is of 3 lines only but it tells us about Story in beautiful and amazing way. I liked the way of representation if you could add more it will make it more interesting.

Plot: 3/5

Story is just like a serial, but yes way of representation is different and impressive.

Characters: 3.5/5

I really liked the way you represented the characters. Words you used to describe their feelings were amazing and you are doing good work.

Grammar. 3/5

Your grammar is pretty good, except some grammatical mistakes which can be rectified.

Flow: 3.5/5

Flow of story is pretty good, everything is going on good pace.

Overall: 3.5/5

Overall, it is good book. But I would surely say that you can definitely add something by yourself to make story unique.

Total. 27/40

7.My Queen S2 by RRao_13

Reviewer/Judge- chocolategirlj26

Title :- (3/5)

The title is apt for the story but I felt like it could be much better and also it's common. Many authors in wattpad used this as a title so you could go for something a little more creative.

Cover :- (2.5/5)

Cover was nice but it lacks. I felt like It could contain a lovey sameer too because though he is merciless mafia he has a love heart too on his wife (naina) , dadi , papa who are his life.

Naina 's pic (it's not look like Innocent)

Author name (it's not clearly visible.)

Blurb :- (2/5)

No description (blurb) , it's the first thing which readers read before reading the story so I suggest you to add description.

Plot :- (4/5)

I loved the plot but it's lit bit common & different from other writers.

Characters :- (3.5/5)

Characters are described well but I felt it lacks comparing to the male lead description.

Grammar :- (3/5)

Punctuation marks are missing instead of that author filled it with [...] , some, typos errors , little bit mistakes in tenses so you need some editing after that it will be perfect.

Flow :- (4/5)

your flow is good and moderate , at last I felt it was fast that's why I reduced 1 mark.

Overall :- (4/5 )

I enjoyed reading this book and I can say I just loved it , the plot and the way you portrayed it in whole story was superb but some editing is must to make the whole story perfect.

Total [26/40]

8.While walking by shambhavisontakke

Reviewer/Judge -chocolategirlj26

Title :- 4/5

Title is perfect apt for the story line but a common one though.

Cover :- 3/5

Book name,author name are hidden in other side of cover , pics used are superb

Blurb :- (3.5/5)

IT'S a common blurb and nice.

Plot :- (4/5)

Plot is a bit common and unique.

Characters :- (4/5)

You played the characters well.

Grammar :- (3/5)

Typos error, punctuation mark are missing (...) Used mostly so you need some editing after that it will be perfect.

Flow :- (3.5/5)

Flow went smoothly but in one place I felt it went to fast but comes in a right phase again.

Overall (4/5)

I enjoyed reading this book and loved samaina scenes , specially that pasta scene but still some editing is must to make the whole story perfect.

Total :- [28/40]