Title: Beta

Author: vanessapiccolo

Summary/Description:

In all my gawking, I forgot I was seated at a window and that he could see me practically drooling over him. My fears were confirmed when he raised a perfect eyebrow and a smug grin played on his beautiful, full lips. I instantly dropped my blue eyes to my coffee and prayed he kept walking. I couldn't have been any more disrespectful! I had openly examined every visible inch of this man when I knew he held one of the two highest ranks possible. I should have instantly bowed my head in submission but I was careless enough to let my mind get carried away.

# of Parts: 43

Status: Completed

My Opinion On The Story:

I personally thought that this book had a sorta cliche, sorta not cliche, plot line. I personally think that the story went by a tad too fast for me, but it was worth the speedy story-line because the outcome was absolutely amazing. The way the author pieced everything together truly amazes me. I was confused at come bit of the story, but the entire thing came together eventually near the end of the book. Overall, I enjoy this book and I would definitely recommend it to you all!