Title: My World
By: rantytings
Genre: Teen Fiction
Rating: 4.6/5

REVIEW:

I like the story specially cute Marcus.

The characters are well developed. It is easy to predict their actions and their dialogues since their personalities are pretty obvious—a good sign of a good character development. The POV's are well written and the thoughts in their heads match their personality.

The plot is cliche but interesting at the same time. The kick-ass heroine helps make the readers intrigue and take them to the edge of their seats to know more.

The grammar needs a little work only in tenses and punctuation. The past and present tenses are need to be used properly.

Your work is elegantly organised and presented well. The start and end of the chapters is trimmed perfectly.

The cover just needs to be modified. In contrast to the story, the cover is pretty plain and boring. Try to add some life in the cover.

Overall, the story is really good and gives off a professional look.

Thanks for writing this story.

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huz