Review#3: Outside the Box

Book: Outside the Box
By: _Twisted_Roses_
Genre: Teen Fiction
Rating: 4.3/5

REVIEW:

This is a cute story. I liked the concept of texting and how even strangers become healers.

The characters are well-developed consisting of Amazon being a chill and kickass heroin and Jar being a sweet and nerdy soul.

The plot needs slight improvements to make it more interesting. Try to add the emotions into the characters more and it would be good to have a ride to character's head often.

The grammar is good and simple, easy to understand.

Overall, it is nice story but little improvements can make it much better.

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huz

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