Hello lenacentinio18! This is what i think about your book, also please check the first chapter for payment. Thank you 😊❤

First impressions:

Title: It's a cute title, makes me feel a romantic mood or wolfie kind of, It's really pretty.
HOWEVER, after i read the summary i discovered it's a zombies kind of story which is completely different

Rating: 5/10

Cover: It's a simplistic cover, it could give romantic vibes but dark ones at the same time, it doesn't have much creativity though but thats fine.
HOWEVER after i read the summary it does not at all fit the story

Rating: 5/10

Summary: Well written and gave a good overview of the book and the story.

Rating: 10/10

Technical Issues: (Grammar-Spelling-Punctuation)

-Maybe you should leave lines in the dialogue between the speakers.
-Chapters are too short, you need more than just one incident in each chapter, readers need more emotions, more description, they need to get attached to the book.
-You do a punctuation mistake a lot where you put between the word and the comma a space like (This , That) when it should be(This, That)
-Also, i dont suggest you keep starting your sentences with and. "and"'s job is to tie things together so you cant put a fullstop before it.

Rating: 5/10

The heart of the book:

Character:

Nell: Nell has no character or personality really, there is not build up to the character. I need more of her, i need to know more things about her through her actions not her words.

Rating: 6/10

Conflict: It's a good idea to have a disease for a zombie apocalypse. But i need to see more build up to that as well, more symptoms, more information, what is happening? Why are zombies just lashing and not attacking? Why playing in water? So i hope you developed that in the rest of the story.

Rating: 7/10

Pace: Too fast maybe? We need the thin line between fast and slow. Mix between both, you need to make it slow through emotional parts but fast in action and tension parts, if you know what i mean.

Rating: 6/10

Emotions: I need more of Nell. Even when she spray peppered her father it was like something insignificant, i need to see her fear. I need to see her freaking out. I need to see her scared. Through words and ACTIONS.

Rating: 6/10

Chapter Endings: Good endings but the chapters are short so it doesn't help much

Rating: 5/10

Suggestions/Compliments:

-I suggest a new cover, more related to the idea of the book.

-More lengthy and informative chapters.

-More emotions from Nell

-Maybe try merging chapters together. Maybe 2 with 3 and 4 with 5 for example and so on, but still keep a hook at the end to keep the anticipation