HELLO GUYS I AM BACK WITH A NEW REVIEWWW! Been so busy with my studies, exams and assignments to the extent that I kinda lost inspiration for a lot of things. That's why i decided to start pushing myself to do stuff and read as an attempt to get inspired or uplifted by anything.

Hello ghlo_riyah!! This is what i think about your book

First impressions:

Title: The title is very interesting, I love the girl's name, it sounds new and unique so well done on that.

Rating: 10/10

Cover: This might be one of my favourite covers I've seen on wattpad actually, i like the colour contrast and i love the font its really beautiful

Rating: 10/10

Summary: Well written, clear and simple. It gives a good overview of the story without spoiling everything.

Rating: 10/10

Technical Issues:

You dont really have much technical issues, but some typos that i saw along the way

Rating: 8.5/10

Spelling: Good spelling and amazing word choice

Rating: 10/10

Punctuation: I didn't have a problem with the punctuation at all

Rating: 10/10

The heart of the book:

Characters: Okay! Let's talk about each character i thought is important till chapter 7.

Adrian: Love the switch of the character from the caring-sweet-about-to-be-king brother to the she-has-to-go brother.

Rakia: I really liked the character of the girl who was asked to grow up and face stuff on her own at a very young age and suddenly out of nowhere

Lousiana: Loved her use of her husband's power to achieve an evil desire

Reginald: I really like the character of the fair, naive king.

Rating: 9.5/10

Conflict: I like that now Rakia has too much on her plate, the step mom and the brother and finding out the whole story about herself.. I'm excited to see how it develops.

Rating: 10/10

Pace: Its a fair and nice race. Not fast, not slow, i personally like it.

Rating: 10/10

Emotions: Your use of words is amazing when it comes to describing scenes and feeling, but i need more of Rakia's feelings and confusion, i need her thoughts and the questions going through her head.

Rating: 9/10

Chapter Endings: Honestly, well done.. Most of the time ill be like "NOOO DON'T END NOW!" So, well done!

Rating: 10/10

Logic: I believe all the things happening are pretty normal and logical so well done with that as well

Rating: 10/10

Suggestions/Compliments:

-To be honest with you, this is the FIRST thing i write in the review, THE PROLOGUE IS AMAZING! I loved the description and the language, it is beautiful and extremely interesting. Well done on the beginning as well, it attracted me and i was hooked to be honest.

-I love the idea of the story, its amazing and the expressions that you use are amazing. You also describe everything really well, honestly.

-The story from the prologue made me really excited to get deep into it and I really liked it and i think im gonna finish it not just read it for the review, so thank you for this.

Keep it up!