_QueenEmily_

First Impression: the title reminds me of Adele's song "When We Were Young" ^_^ cute plot

I really like the idea of having saved email drafts to tell the story. Each chapter is short and sweet, but I'm just worried that because the chapters are so short, this story could end up being a lot of chapters, especially if you need to develop the plot. I'm also concerned that there is no stopping place, because these email drafts could go on forever. I am interested to see what will happen in the future, though. 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

- bluecrayonlady