@rushelyn 

First Impression: Love the cover! You make really awesome covers :) 

Since you only have the prologue up, there's not much I can really say. I love the plot of this, and I'm very interested in how it will progress. You do an amazing job with building suspense in the prologue, which really puts the readers on the edges of their seats. Keep up the great work and this story will be awesome! 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with these suggestions, then ignore them :) 

- bluecrayonlady