Mona_the_Wicked

First Impression: nice cover!

What you have so far is very well written. You have a great prologue, captivating the reader's attention. I also found it kind of funny that Mona meets Flynt again, and the banter between them is kinda cute. You have amazing vocabulary and imagery, and I can really imagine everything in my head. I love the sarcastic comebacks Mona has when talking to her parents. You have an amazing writing style, so just keep doing what you're doing!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you give one of my stories a read, follow me, or give me a shoutout! If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make some art for one of my stories, and I will post it! 

- bluecrayonlady