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First Impression: I can't wait to read this!

This is such an amazing story. I'm so intrigued right from the start, and there wasn't a moment when I was bored when I was reading this. Everything flows nicely, and moves at a perfect pace, especially since we are introduced to Rhett pretty quickly. Your titles are really creative, and I find myself laughing when I'm reading your chapters. You have great characterization, as I can really find myself knowing these characters, and knowing their personalities. I also love how it's cute and sweet, and even though the plot may be a little cliche, you put your own spin on it so that it's completely original. The only thing I found was there are some spelling errors, but those can be fixed easily. Please continue this story, because I am looking forward to a lot more! 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady