Regular_Guy

First Impression: I don't know anything about Deadpool

So this story has a lot of humor, which is great. You also have vivid descriptions, although sometimes they are little too vivid, and most of the time, I'm cringing. I guess this just isn't my type of story, but it's really well written. I'm sometimes confused by the weird interruptions, and how he sometimes goes off topic, but you have a nice writing style. Great work!

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