clicheiknow

First Impression: I love both covers!

Accidental Cinderella: I really like the plot, because you take a classic story and put a twist on it to make it your own. Since there's only one chapter, the only suggestion I can give is to watch your verb tense. One of your sentences is "She is known for..." and then the next one is "She never wished..." You switch from present to past, so make sure to either stay in present or past when talking about the same situation. Great work! 

Hug Buddy: This story has an interesting plot. Make sure to watch your verb tense here as well. I'm also confused to the whole "hug buddy" situation. Why is the main character doing it? Granted, there's only 2 chapters, but it would be nice to have more description about the background information, otherwise the reader is confused. 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady