__Sun-Rise__

First Impression: I absolute love the cover! And the title, haha :D

This was a really well written story! The narrative really shows the personality of the character, especially when she punched him! You have a good length of the chapters and the plot is pretty unique. This plot could also turn cliche, so if you are trying to avoid that, make sure to be careful! I would love to have some more imagery in your descriptions, so I can really imagine myself being there or even just imagining the complete scene in my head. Also, watch your verb tense in some situations. Some parts of the story are a little slow, which causes the reader to be bored. For example, I think the thoughts that run through her head when she's choosing her outfit are excess information, and this could cause the story to be slow. Also, is it realistic to be expelled for punching someone? I thought it was detention, and the worst is suspension? The language also sounds a little immature/childish for someone who is in high school. I guess change up the vocabulary often and use different words. Always have a thesaurus nearby! Are the characters in high school? I don't know if I missed it, but there wasn't much describing the background of the main character. Overall, great work! 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then feel free to ignore them :) 

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- bluecrayonlady