The Runaway by kirstyt97

I really enjoyed this story.
I especially enjoyed the fact that Lily did not come to know Christ the minute she was introduced, but that she had doubts. I think that it creates a better character development for her to not aimlessly follow this idea.

Title: 15/15

I think the title fits this story perfectly. I love that it has more meaning behind it besides that Lily is known to runaway, but that people actually call her the Runaway.

Cover: 15/15

I like that you have more dark colors and colors that blend in well as part of the color scheme. They just seem fitting with a girl trying to hide.

Blurb: 14/15

I feel like this could flow a little bit more. It definitely does a good job introducing the main idea of the story. It might flow a bit better if each paragraph had more to it or if there were fewer paragraphs.

Plot: 20/20

I find this to be a very unique plot and I enjoy the ways you added your own twist to things that are more common.

Originality: 20/20

Like I said before I definitely find this book to be very original.

Characters: 20/15
I find the characters to be very well developed and I love that they seem to have there own thoughts.

Overall Story: 100

Final Notes:

The chapter tilted the Runway seems more like a prologue than a chapter.

Overall I really enjoyed this story and I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a good read.

Sorry this has taken me so long to post!