Author: darksagz
Book: Longing For Love
Genre: Teen Fiction
Chapters Read: 5

Cover: 1/5
The cover only includes a picture which may give the reader a first impression that you cannot be bothered. I would recommend you to add the book title and author name to give it a more professional look. If need be contact a book cover maker, there are plenty on Wattpad.

Title: 3/5
This tells the reader that the main character is longing for love implying that they feel lonely. I think the title is not bad although in some forms it may give away too much.

Summary: 2/5
The summary is great as it is not too long however there are various problems. For a starter the tenses change from when you are still writing in first person. There are also in my opinion too many exclamation marks as well as question marks. I understand you are trying to show the seriousness of the situation but too many of these is not very great! Final thing you share something the mother says to the daughter however you should put that in quotation marks. :-)

Storyline: 3/5
The storyline seems great and intersting, however I would advise you to put certain twists and surprises which may be unexpected.

Overall:
Overall I feel your story has great potential however you should definitely get a new cover and sort out the summary to make the reader want to click on your book. Also there are various grammatical errors inside the book and you should edit these. Also describe the surroundings more and feelings of the character.

Anything Else:
Well just to take into account everything I have said and good luck ;-)

Score:
9/20.

I hope this helped and I am truly sorry if I have offended you in any way.

Kiara.