Author: Arabella9186
Book: Darkness Wrapped In Light
Genre: Horror
Chapters Read: 5

Cover: 2/5
The cover only includes a picture and the title. Also the letter is slightly cut off. You should also put the author name on there so it looks more professional.

Title: 3/5
"Darkness wrapped in Light"
It's interesting although isn't the 'Light wrapped in Darkness'. It relates with the genre more then :-)

Summary: 0/5
There is no summary so I can't really give you a score. The summary allows the reader to get an insight on the what the book is about so you should try and write one ;-)

Storyline: 2/5
Sounds good to me so far considering what I read. It has a lot of potential but you need to slow it down. Develop your characters and descriptions. You could also use cliff-hangers to make the reader want to read on. Also put your author note in bold or itallic so it's easier for the author.

Overall:
I read the first five chapters and think it has a lot of potential. Just start of slow with adding a summary then change the cover.

Anything Else:
Nope. Cool story! ;-) I know you can do it ;-).

Score:
7/20.

I hope this helped and I am truly sorry if I have offended you in any way.

Kiara.