Author: hoodzilla_
Book: Daylight
Genre: Fanfiction (Ashton Irwin)
Chapters Read: 4

Cover: 3/5
It looks simple and the font is cool. However me being me, I would like it if maybe the guy she bites is on there and/or you could add the quote. You could also use 2 colours such as red and black it's more 'vampire'. :-)

Title: 4/5
"Daylight"
It's interesting. I don't read many vampire books but it's cause they can't go out in the sun I believe, so it relates with the story. Although daylight on it's own sounds simple you could change it to 'Wishing to see Daylight' or something. That's totally up to you though. :-)

Summary: 4/5
I love the fact that you start of with a quote. The I needs to be capital. It's pretty short but to the point.

Storyline: 4/5
Sounds good to me so far considering what I read. There's quite a few grammar and tense errors and the 'I' needs to be capital.

Overall:
There's a few grammatical errors and tense errors but they can be fixed easily. ;-)

Anything Else:
Nope. Cool story! ;-)

Score:
15/20.

I hope this helped and I am truly sorry if I have offended you in any way.

Kiara.