Author: caCrisostomo

Genre: Literary Fiction

What I liked:

Your writing was immaculate, I didn't see a single mistake to even pull out.

It gave me similar vibes to the type of stories we would read at school. If I was the type of person that liked to analyse my readings then this would be the perfect kind of story for it.

I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into writing this and it shows throughout.

I honestly wish I could write this well!

What I didn't like:

I feel like this was not for me at all, but that doesn't make it bad. The wording was just way too complicated and dramatic for me to make sense of what's going on.

There was a lot of beating around the bush and jumping over hoops to avoid saying anything simple and I found that quite detrimental at times.

Overall:
If I fully understood what was going on and what I was reading I feel like this would've been amazing. I'm going to give it a 6/10.