Cover:

I would give this a 7-8/10
I like how it looks like a professional book cover, the font is clear and looks beautiful and certainly grabs your attention. The quote really draws me in, especially because of the angelic man looking like an enigma.

Story line: the first thing that caught my attention was the grammar and typos. You can usually expect a certain amount from most Wattpad books but there were far too many and although the reader can kind of understand what is happening- all of the errors stop you from reading the story consistently, easily and stop you from having a pleasurable experience.

My advice would be to re-read/ edit  the book and sort out a lot of the mistakes like (random words suddenly being capital in the middle of sentences, spelling mistakes, incorrect tenses, broken sentences, misused words, lack of paragraphing etc)

I recommend breaking your text into paragraphs so it is easier for the readers to read and take in and fixing up the format so the writing looks more polished as this also turns a lot of people off.

I love the use of media in your story because it makes it more interactive and interesting- adding a personal touch to the book.

Also I think it could be a great idea to try and reach out to see if anyone is willing to help you edit your book because I think you have a good story line! It is very descriptive, the characters are intriguing, the scenes play out like a movie because they seem like they have been so carefully thought out! Every action the character does seems pivotal.

The story really sets it apart from other books on the platform but unfortunately the errors in the writing stopped me from reading too much of it, so really do look into that editor thing because I think your book can really be getting way more reads than it currently has.