Ok first of all I'm SO sorry that it took this long to write the review, I got caught up in some things and time went by so fast 😭

Author: @ipriyasingh

Cover:I love the whole free independent vibe going on in the cover. Like you can honestly tell a weight has been lifted off the woman's shoulders and she's basking in the warmth.
7-8/10

Plot- the story starts with Veronica narrating her life to us. She is going through a horrible breakup and walks us through her old relationship as she speaks about the past until we reach her present.

One thing I loved about the story was how her sadness was relatable, the way you described it, all the different emotions she felt, all the small details were mentioned so well it really felt like she was a real three dimensional person and not a character in a book.

Veronica's transition from sobbing over zac to standing up for herself was so satisfying to watch. And when she slapped him, that was my favorite part.

Mason seems like a very kind and sweet guy and they have an instant connection, although the scene where we find out the place Vernonica woke up at wasn't his real house had me freaking out.

Advice- a lot of times in the dialogue of the book when the characters use sarcasm I think it would be a good idea to use italics and really emphasize on some words so the readers know  it's sarcastic (also you can make your characters roll their eyes or hint on a mocking smile) Otherwise it can be hard to tell if the character's being serious or not and that can really mess up the conversation.

Another thing that could improve    the description is a wider range of vocabulary. For example you used the word "mad" a couple of times together so the reader would feel like they're just reading the same thing over and over again. I think it would be a good idea to google synonyms of the word you want to use and pick the best one so you don't repeat the same descriptive words often. This could make your writing more colorful and exciting to read! 😄💕

Something I didn't particularly like was when Veronica got that mean text message from that random girl. I felt like the way she reacted was too dramatic and the whole "why is life being so cruel to me" made her sound a little whiny. I think it would be better if she was more irritated and sarcastic like she looks up at the sky and says "any more surprises Satan?" Or a simple "why is life such a pain in the ass".

The story definitely needs editing to correct typos, a couple grammatical errors etc but other than that I'm very glad zac's asshole nature was finally brought to light and am curious to see how mason and Veronica's relationship goes from here!