A change of cover how interesting...though I did prefer the old one, this one doesn't look too bad.

After rereading your book I found both positives and negatives. The story is quite interesting with all the political intrigue and campaigns. I do like Alexander's character very much but sometimes I feel he is a bit too posh. I love your inclusion of Hepastion, not many people realise that Alexander was gay so I think that it is great that it is getting out now. I also love your use of symbolism especially with Achille's armour.

But I did feel as if you haven't found the right balance between showing and telling. There are some parts where I am like "Whoa!" but there are others where I am like "I'm sure you could do better" For example I loved it when he was talking about the sea. But I felt in the part where he was talking about sharpening his sword I wanted to know how he did it? Was he sweating? Were sparks flying? Was it hot? Describe you surroundings. I understand writing in the rush and excitement is really hard, but slow down. If it helps I always tell my self  "The reader knows nothing, I have to paint picture for them. A picture they can clearly see." So slow down, don't describe every detail but try to paint a picture in the reader's mind.

Over all the story had great potential. The only negative being showing/telling part, but that comes with experience. If you need any advice on how to do it, please feel free to contact me. I'm available when I don't have exams.

Keep writing! I know you will do great! :)