How About Seven? By @drizzlestarstone

Cover Impression: Not particularly the best cover out there but it will do. Seriously though if you want your story to get the attention that it deserves I suggest tweaking it or getting a professional to do it. (I'd be happy to help if you want :D) I really like the caption "Seven guys,One girl. One Mission." it gives it sense of deadliness.

Title: Pretty good...doesn't give too much away but you get the atmosphere.

Blurb: Interesting and quirky. Definitely would like to check it out.

The beginning was really interesting. I wanted to know who they where and what the logo meant and everything. I find the main characters thoughts very cynical at times. I find that often happens with female protagonists that are considered "strong". I understand that you've already established the character and all but maybe some food for thought, she can be a badass but still be kind. Also I find it very stereotypical that the father is very mean to her. Sometimes I feel as if the female empowerment is a bit forced.

But now that the negatives are out of the way lemme tell you the positives. This is one of the best stories I've read on wattpad. And in all honesty it hasn't gotten the attention it deserves. It is well written with layers upon layers of interesting storyline. It certainly had me wanting more and more. Remember to keep writing as practice makes perfect. I hope your story goes far!

Rating 8/10

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