Title: The Player's A Prince
Author: -TanyaWrites-

Synopsis:

"Go. Be with him. Be with Creed. You'll be happier that way," he smiled small, staring at me with these deepness in his eyes.

"But you never let me finish..." I mumbled while taking a step closer to him. He stood stiffly on his grounds.

"Isn't that obvious? You don't need to finish your words for me to understand," tears started to form on his eyes. He never breaks, he's Damien. Until now...

"Shh... I don't want Creed," I closed the gap between us by placing my index finger on his lips. Those once soft and kissable lips, were now chapped.

He looked at me shocked with a single tear rolling down on his cheeks.

"I want you..." I smiled and leaned closer to him. To the guy that conquered my heart months ago.

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Evanna 'Eva' Skies, was your normal regular girl. Not a living barbie doll and not a goody two shoes either. Just a normal girl, living a normal life. Where daydreaming about fictional boys are way better than real life guys.

But no matter how normal your life is, there's always a problem... And for her, the problem is Mr. Player a.k.a. Damien Salvador.

Why? Oh, that's because she's basically the only girl who dares to mess with him without falling for him and for him, that's something else. That's the first time he saw a girl, who didn't fall for him.

Damien himself, kept a dirty little secret. Something he didn't want anybody to find out.

Join Eva as she needs to find a way to survive high school with a player follower her back. She'll find more dramas, more troubles, more hatred, secrets will be revealed, jealousies, and most importantly... Love.

My opinions:

- The general idea of the story is quite cliche but what gives the story it's identity is the slight change that the author made to her characters. There's Mr Player a.k.a. the guy in every girls' dreams. Then there's the girl. But instead of being Ms Goody-Two-Shoes or Ms I'm-Being-Bullied-All-Day-Everyday-Even-Though-I-Have-The-Heart-Of-A-Saint, the girl has a normal life with a normal personality albeit a bit rebellious. The change of how the female lead is portrayed in this book is good because let's be honest here, no real person have such a saintly heart. Even the most innocent and naive of people will not have such hearts. So good job author!

- It's easy to relate to the characters because their personalities are realistic. The characters have diverse personalities which makes it easier for readers to understand and relate to the characters. There aren't any characters who are Ms I'm-so-friendly-and-peaceful-that-I-should-get-the-Nobel-Peace-Prize or Mr I'm-so-handsome-and-so-perfect-and-oh-so-threatening-that-I-can-break-your-bones-with-just-one-look. Kudos to you author!

- The story flows nicely and smoothly. I didn't find any major loopholes which could potentially confuse readers so far which is good considering that the book is unedited. Both the story and character development is fairly consistent. Of course, the characters' personalities can still be further developed because there are times when I feel slightly frustrated with Eva's attitude. Perhaps you can give explanations as to why Damien is always around Eva or why he enjoys annoying her in a separate chapter in his POV? You can even make chapters in Damien's POV as mini bonus chapters or something like that. I have my own theories as to why Damien's always around Eva but I don't want to spoil the story for interested readers so I'm not going to give away my theories.

- I do suggest giving further descriptions on the characters. Not too much. Just enough to give readers a general idea on the characters. Perhaps you can give hints? Something like giving a general description of how their outfit looked like, etc. This is just so that readers can have a quick guide when visualizing the characters.  You can even provide pictures in between paragraphs. :) But I would say, good job on not giving away too much about the characters! It makes the story much more interesting and engaging.

- You need to be more careful with your grammar and punctuation. Nothing major and it doesn't affect the story much but I think this is something that you should have in mind when you start to edit your story. Here's an example taken from your book's synopsis:

  That's the first time he saw a girl , who didn't fall for him. 

I typed the comma in bold because the comma made the meaning of the sentence completely different from the intended. Without the comma, the sentence would be: That's the first time he saw a girl who didn't fall for him. This sentence means that it was Damien's first time seeing someone who didn't fall for his charms. BUT. If you read it with the comma, the sentence would be: That's the first time he saw a girl, who didn't fall for him. This sentence means that it's Damien's first time to see an actual girl while the next part of the sentence after the comma becomes confusing. So when you start editing your book, do take note of these errors.

Star Rating:

☆☆☆☆☆

Recommendations:

Do you like romance? How about a high school based story? What about a high school romance? If you're answer is yes to at least 2 of these questions, then this book is for you. Strongly recommended for everyone to read! Really though, go read it. This book is amazing and I, myself, am excitedly waiting for its next update.

Thank you for requesting -TanyaWrites-! I really enjoyed reading your book! :)

-Angelica