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Book: K!ll Your Swan.

I gotta say I'm liking the name! Very distinctive

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Cover

It's a nice boon cover, I can see you put a lot of thought into it, and the creativity of your subtitle.

Blurb

I knew it was going to be a good story when you mention there will be some dark humor in there, and you proved me right!

I like your blurb, it's not too short or long, and the way you ended your blurb is such that your readers will be curious to know what happens next in your book!
So, that's a good touch.

Intro of the book

* Honestly, the beginning of the book left me surprised. Not what I expected, but then again I didn't know what to expect. Already in the first chapter, a lot of drama was going on.

* The protagonist has this- permit me to say it- badass vibe going on. It certainly left me curious to read more!

* Their confidence is something I only wish I could have, cause- wow.

Plot- the storyline

* Chapter 2-3: we are off to a great start- and by great I mean the protagonist getting kidnapped.

*Nothing much to say besides that, but things are escalating rather quickly.

*In chapters 4-5: We get a little insight into the protagonist of how severely suicidal they are...  To the point of practically begging their kidnapper to end their life. I was disturbed.

* What an intense scene. It kept me on my toes. A point goes to you!

* My favorite part about your book, is the way you end your chapters such that you leave your readers wanting to scroll to the next one. Which is a great tactic to keep them interested.

Writing style

I like your writing style, and the way your protagonist explains their point of view with dark humor, it's quite entertaining, and I'm sure your readers would agree. It suits the book.

Overall

* An insane mafia romance book, but then again what do you expect when it's a mafia romance book?

Honestly, it's my first time reading anything relating to mafia books, so I guess you could say you were my first.

(why does that sound weird lol) 0_0

* Anyway it's a promising book (although it might not be for everyone)

* It's the kind of book that'll leave you laughing for the next few minutes, and then genuinely concerned for the main character. You can never tell what dark remark will come out of the main character's mouth.

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⭐⭐⭐⭐ stars ^^

Author: sodapopxtreme

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