Date: March 13th, 2023.

Book: I Will save you!

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Cover

It's a beautiful and cute cover, it gives the impression to be a romance book. The title is well-centered and visible to the readers, you can see your name clearly, so that's pretty good! I just like how cute it looks.

Blurb.

Not too long and not too short, it's an okay blurb, but I would have preferred you didn't give too much information. If you can edit it fine, if you don't then that's also fine.

The intro of the book

* At the opening of chapter one, you had me engaged with the story. I kept wondering what made the character so distressed. So,  you're off to a road!

My favorite part of this chapter.
* A lot had happened before the story even started. So it gave a sense of depth to the story.

In most of the books I've read the chapters usually start afresh, so this is nice.

The plot: storyline

* In chapters 2-3: We are slowly getting to have a sense of what's going on, and we get to experience different perspectives from both the female and male protagonists.

*Next! Chapters 4-5: So far so good, but  I would like to advise you to reduce the use of 'could' or 'can'

An example (in chapter 4):

× I could make out the silhouette of my house.

Instead say, I make out the silhouette of my house.

× I can see the variant flowers.

Instead say, I see the variant flowers.

It just makes the reading flow better. Just imagine you are in your character's shoes. Pretend it was you in all this situation, and you have a friend with you that is blind and deaf (in this case that's the readers lol)

When you see a dog peeing in the yard, you won't necessarily tell them I could see I dog peeing, you might want to say I see a dog or a dog is peeing in the yard! And then you preceded to describe what it looks like and such.

Hope this helps <3

* In your Authors note you mentioned that English wasn't your first language. I just want to congratulate your effort in making this book despite that. You tried, honestly. I know it can't be easy!

Writing style

You have a nice and simple writing style, I believe with time with writing and reading you will get better!

Overall

It's a lovely romance book where the protagonist is faced with the difficulties of life meanwhile dealing with the death of a crush.

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⭐⭐⭐ stars!

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