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Genre: Sci-Fi, short story

Rating:⭐⭐⭐ 3/5 stars

Status: Completed

Type of book: Wattpad/Ebook

Date Read start to finish: May 30th, 2022

Chapters in total: 1

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Blurb:

The short story of choosing the right path in life if this world of trust, leadership , and loyalty would suit someone even if things are unexpected in the job.

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Review:

The story starts with the main character looking out at the sky,  I'm assuming is named Raina though it's a little unclear who the characters are. Which is one criticism I have is the characters aren't really fleshed out, you get a few descriptors of the characters but not much. There is some grammatical errors such as a few spelling mistakes here and there.

"and walk to the counsel he fail on one of the white steps."

I'm assuming the author meant fell instead of fail but so far the rest is ok and no other spelling mistakes then that. 

There is a counsel of the lords where you are introduce to quite a few lords but none seem to really be described except for the main lord and and Lord Ford. The book also seems to be going fast, like one minute the main character and Zach(a servant in training I assume) reading a newspaper to some issues with the counsel where they need to clean the table.

Also not sure if the characters eyes change because they are possible robots or a different species like how Zach's eyes became white when a newspaper article peaked his interest or when Raina's eyes turned green when the lord ordered her to do something.

All in all it's not a bad read but I'd love to see it developed more, maybe into a full book than a short story. How Raina came to be a worker/servant for the Lord, why their eyes change different colors for certain events. I'd also love if the author developed this short story more, tell the story of the world within. The lords and their story, drama and corruption within, the story behind Raina and Zach.