True Love by TheUltimateBell

Cover

The cover is pretty good considering it's a fanfic.  You would expect the pictures of the people it's based on and the title so it's good because it fits the book and the genre.  9/10

Title

The title is fitting as well I like the title it's simple yet attractive.  But because it's not immensely creative I'll give it a 6/10

Plot/concept

I think the idea of the story is creative and well thought out but the way it's written doesn't compliment that.  What I would suggest is taking your idea and rewriting it a different way.  Fix the spelling mistakes, punctuate properly, and try not to be repetitive in the words you use, it's okay to use happy, sad, mad, but use them sparingly try ecstatic, enraged, joyful.  Also try to paint a picture with your words get the reader to feel like their there in the story.  It's a great way to attract readers.  1/10

Book in general

I like the concept of the book but there's just a few plot holes and it's hard to read but it is a good but there's just a lot of grammar mistakes and it's not the most descriptive.  5/10